 ArcticFire 2007-12-01 . chapter 1Seems interesting! |
 teachergirl 2007-09-09 . chapter 4I don't read stories with Halloween Balls, Yule Balls, Valentine Balls, Graduation Balls, or any other kind of Ball. I read stories with originality not the same old, same old. It's too bad really because I did like the Draco/Harry friendship story line you were developing. You kept it at a very good pace--not to0 much, not too little
We all have our tolerance level for what we'll read and what we won't. It just happens that "Balls" are where I draw the line. Personally, I think that author's use them too much and use them because they don't have anything to say. That doesn't seem to be your case, so I'm confused. Maybe you just like them. Nevertheless, I'm off to another story. |
 teachergirl 2007-09-09 . chapter 1How is it that Harry can just get up and go to Diagon Alley? He's never been there alone before and since third year, he's always had a guard. |
 TheAmazingEscapadesOfEggbert 2007-08-13 . chapter 32this...was...amazing. |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 12Yay! The Draco/Hannah thing becomes even more obvious in this chapter and this will me by last review for today. I'll try to finish reviewing your story tomorrow :P |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 11Yay for the Hannah/Draco movement! :P I think it really become obvious in this chapter who you're going to pair Draco up with... |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 10Yay! Hannah finally makes an appearance! Um...Yeah well you already know I think you're an awesome writer and that I love this story so from now on all of my reviews will just be pointing out lines that I liked from the story or good things about because I doubt that i'll find something I don't like :P |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 8Sirius! Yay! (wait he already showed up in this story...I think) anyways still Yay! I love Sirius...I love to many things...I think I have said "I love" like at least 10 times in all of my reviews for your story... |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 7Ok 'm officially tired of writing reviews (Just kidding your story is awesome) "You’re an exceptional wizard, Potter, much as it pains me to admit it. Now go, before I cease being nice to you." Snape turned to some essays on his desk and picked up a quill covered in red teacher’s ink, making it clear that Harry was dismissed. That line is just great...ok now I will leave to review chapter 8 before I run out of nice things to say. |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 6Yay! Fred and George are mentioned in this chapter! (although its like a super brief appearance I'm still happy) Fred and George are my favorite characters. I love this chapter because you get to see what Draco has to go through and it explains why he's so mean to everyone at Hogwarts. Well yeah thats it for this chapter now to review chater 7 :P |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 5"Creevey, the match! You are not meant to advertise broomsticks! You’re as bad as Jordan!"
(I LOVe that line :P) So far i still like your story even though its long (I like long stories its just that i like to complain) |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 4Yay! Hufflepuff won! I love your story but I still have like 25 more chapters to review -.- |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 3There was a look of amusement in Dumbledore’s twinkling blue eyes and he put down the book. "Dear, dear, what is the world coming to? Harry Potter expressing concern for Draco Malfoy?"
Ha! I LOVE that line! Aw! Why'd you make the Hufflepuff team loose? Hufflepuff ROCKS! |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 2Squee! They're back at hogwarts! But I think I did find a mistake.."And you’re Quidditch captain for Gryffindor, Harry, seeing as Katie left last year?"
Katie Bell was never Qudditch captain. It was Angelina Johnson that was captain. But I'm not sure what I was trying to say anymore... |
 IheartFredWeasley 2007-05-25 . chapter 1OK (I already read this story once and I just forgot to review) I like this chapter because you get an insight on Draco's life :P I also like that you don't make him completley nice and caring. |