Great story. I just used it in my essay on fan fiction for my English 102 class. Keep it up:)

Aww! I like it!

The comparison between the life of superheroes and a game was an interesting one. Great imagery. I still get confused with the character's relations to each other in the Ghost Rider comics.

WOW. Seriously, love how you captured the emotions. Even though I've never read the comic series, I really love this! beautifully written.

What a bittersweet story.

I don't even know if bittersweet is the right word to use, but it's the only one I can think of at the moment. I like how you made very clear their relationship to one another, as well as defining their own, distinct personalities.

Good job!

this was very good, and very...how can I say...realistic and really does show what Dan Ketch and Johnny Blaze fought for (as said in one review).

I think this was an EXCELLENT way to explain what Johnny and Dan are going through, what they're fighting for, that they can still win prizes with their tiring work as Ghost Riders, and what it truly means to be Spirits of Vengeance!

You did an awesome job!

It was very spiritual and very heart-feeling, and I love those kinds of stories!

I hope to see MORE Ghost Rider stories from you! You've got a great skill with it!

I’ve only read about two ghost rider stories (and seen the movie) but I really liked this. Keep up the good work.

No one else reviewed? Unbelievable. Interesting story. I like stories that show the heroes being, well, normal... -ish. Reminds you that under the spandex or leather, they're really all human. Okay, human-OID, but I think you get my point. Keep up the good work! *does v for victory sign*