Reviews for Shadows of Splendor

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a 2006-01-13 ch 7, anon.	abusewhen is the next chapter?the story is awesome!
Alex 2005-12-27 ch 7, anon.	abusewow this is good but it is highly confuzing but thats probably cuz i'm stupid hehehehehehe
TheOneGnome! 2005-11-28 ch 7, anon.	abuseAwesome, but I hate cliffhangers! Please hurry and get the next one out soon, not tring to make you feel as if you need to rush or anything. And, look, look, I reviewed! Oh, yeah!
windflame 2005-11-25 ch 7, anon.	abusei hope u update soon this is good
AnimeDutchess 2005-11-21 ch 7,	abuseholy cow, i can't believe you finally updated! please update again soon!
Sir Gawain of Camelot 2005-11-12 ch 7, anon.	abuseYay! you updated! you live! Why is Chrno acting weird toward Marie? Oh, you may know me by froggiesrcool.
monkeygirl982 2005-11-12 ch 7, anon.	abusefinally! thank you for updating! i really like your story its cool. will aion make an appearance! well bye! ^-^
chew sung 2005-11-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseWOW! Wat a great story! I would love to read it, update soon k..
Sir Gawain of Camelot 2005-05-09 ch 1,	abusethis is the best CC fic i've read so far! it has great descripsion, and all the charactors are in charactor! wich means no (at least not obvious) romance or anything! ^_^ i also really like your writing style! now to my sister... TrisakAminawn, you're up! TrisakAminawn speaking, lazily borrowing her sister's review window. I agree with all above statements. The characters behave as they usually do; you've pinned their interreactions excellently as far as I can tell. Also, you're right, it's cliche, but you're USING the cliche to get your mood across - and that's NOT laziness, it's clever... So, yes, I'm babbling rather, aren't I? G'bye, then, we'll be back later. Mwahahaha! Oh, wait, that's not a threat, is it? may the road rise to meet you, may the wind be always at your back. Omnia mutantir, nihil interit. Everything changes, nothing is truly lost.
fire and napalm 2005-02-04 ch 4,	abuseYay, I think you're doing good, though you're taking your sweet time to explain everything. Not that that's a bad thing, it's just annoying if the author doesn't update regularily. It holds readers though. Keep up the good work. A few wording problems are all there is to correct for a bit of constuctive criticism if you wish, but I'm used to filling in blanks so it doesn't bother me. By your leave, goodday and post soon pleease. I've favourited your story.
I'm not Rosette, I'm not Az... 2005-01-15 ch 6, anon.	abuseThe story is absolutly wonderful! I urge you to keep the good work up!
Jayuna 2005-01-09 ch 6,	abusewow! great story! update soon!
Digiko 2005-01-09 ch 6, anon.	abusea ha ha, I haven't reviewed any other chapter 'cept this one and the first one. I have on thing to say... Excellent Story! I can't wait for more! Please write more. puppy eyes
Digiko 2005-01-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, it's a little to late to review chapter 1 I'm guessing, but awesome story! I want to find out what happens next! So, this review is terribly short.
Steve225 2005-01-08 ch 6,	abuseWow. I've just started reading your fanfic and I was amazed. You have a great talent for writing. I suggest that you write a little bit longer chappys and that you pick up the pace on writing. I'm not trying to criticize your way of writing but you might get more reveiwers. I dono, you don't have to listen to me. I can give you an idea though, if your still in the writing stage, but you have Aion appear while they're there or something. That could be kewl. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!

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