Please, no, not Kasumi and Kyo. NEVER. Kasumi and Iori forever.

-kills Yuki.- Cheating on poor Kusanagi-san like that. KASUMI ROCKS! YAY FOR KASUMI! vv; Please make Kasumi feel better soon. Iori would be a good way to do that.

Um, I just wanted to say, I liked this chapter so much, and I've read it so many times, that it inspired one of the pairings in my newest KoF story. This is quite a cute pairing, but don't tell anyone I said that, because it's supposed to be a surprise. Thank you so much for thinking outside the box, and knowing Kasumi Todoh will always be too good for Shingo Yabuki.

This is the only good KOF story on this entire site, and to see that it hasn't been finished is rather depressing.

The characterizations are wonderful, and I sincerely hope that you'll continue at some point.

Please get on with it. I'm at the edge of my seat. What happens next. If I may suggust try a little vengence type senario. A lillte anger and betrayal.

Yuki seemed so different in the second chapter from the first. Ah yes, Kaomi Valentine. She gets too giddy when faced with conflict. Surprise, surprise. Hehe. XD

Other than punctuation mistakes and grammer, it's all good. Good job!

holy mother! wow, that was freaking awsome! oh, oh tell me there is more! this totally rocks and i want more! plase?? *hearts*

I like how well you've written this. A lot of attention to detail and control of the drama aspects. I really like how you handled Yuki, and truth be told, I feel more sympathetic to her than Kasumi. I like Kasumi, but she is stubborn as hell (inhumanly stubborn actually), as opposed to Yuki who is unassuming and normal, with a normal person's weaknesses (which is why I understand why she wnet through what she did).

Still, I feel you made Yuki and Kyo a bit too weak. And when Kasumi has an aim in mind, she will stubbornly see it through no matter what logic or common sense say. Check out how she and Kyo act by playing SNK vs Capcom Chaos. A lot of character in the pre match dialogues. Plus, Yuki has a huge temper and usually leads Kyo around, not the other way. I would have thought she would have kicked that dude's **.

Anyways, I love how this seems human as opposed to all the random fics that I've seen here abouts. My only qualms are the short length of each chapter and the fact I hate 1st person, but the well written story more than makes up for it. Plus I love any KoF fic with Yuki or Angel being prominent.

I really like the story your building around the characters, i must say you write very well in a POV method. I don't really know all that much about Yuki so i had a very blank perception of this character but i still enjoyed this chapter, i like your style of writting, its breif but to the point in description, i loved the play on colours at the end, very well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wonderful absolutely wonderful. I really liked it. God effort. Keep it up. I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter. TTFN(ta ta for now)

I liked this, it has a prettyu good storyline. The only thing was, didn't Kasumi lose a little too easy? Still you really captured Kasumi and Iori's characters well. I look forward to the next chapter.