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Reviews for: The Other Senshi
anna-darkfate9
2004-10-25 . chapter 1
nyo~ guess who? =^-^= Im not much of a Sailor moon fan but this is a nice ans interesting story. However, I propose you work a bit more on the paragraphing especially during the dialogues. Don't worry, the English is good though there are some typos and misspelled words. Do continue, you got me hooked on this fic. =^-^= nyo~
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