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Edwardd
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
Amazing story.

I'll be waiting patiently for the next update. =)
benjaminbeep
2005-12-17 . chapter 2
this is awesome u should update fast
Zarroc
2005-12-05 . chapter 2
this sounds really good, you should update it sooner, hopefully faster than a year ;)
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands
2005-12-05 . chapter 2
This is awesome! You should continue updating it! lol
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands
2005-12-05 . chapter 1
Wow! Exciting chapter! Great job!
charmedtomeetyou
2005-12-05 . chapter 2
i LOVE this!! pls update really soon!i hope ron lives..
little1forever
2005-12-05 . chapter 2
This is a really great fic and i cant wait for nxt chapter!
ice-witch-666
2005-12-05 . chapter 2
i'd completely forgotten about this story... this was so randomly out of the blue that it surprised me!
anywho, down to the reviewing...
to tell you the truth, when you first submitted this story, i didn't particularly like it. dunno why, it just didn't really appeal to me... not that i would have said that in my review coz back then i was was too nice for anything like that...
anywho, that's all changed now! i love it! it's so scary and twisty and horribly sad that it ends up being brilliant! i even re-read the first chapter again first and loved that!
so, coming to my conclusion: UPDATE MORE! less than a year from now, preferably! coz if you don't then i'm gonna go back to disliking this, as well as disliking you for preventing me from reading more of something i have just realised how much i liked.
Denise
2005-03-14 . chapter 1
UPDATE soon plez!
KevinJonas-N-MikaelaDanvers
2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Ur killing me, ur really killing me! Is this a one shot? U should add some more! Its so good! Plz update soon!
Potter4prez
2005-01-23 . chapter 1
I haven't read this story yet, but you have to hurry up and write the next chapter for corruptive. Also I think you might like The Prank War by crazygirl47.

-Potter4prez-
wulf flame
2005-01-16 . chapter 1
Great story very mysterious though leaves ya with quite a few questions. Hope you get a second chapter up soon.
rugby-chick
2005-01-12 . chapter 1
why ?? why did you have to kill the twins they shouldn't even be there - as of the 5th book they lived in london and percy wasn't even supposed to be talking to his parents

good plot though
blooded moon
2004-10-24 . chapter 1
hey emzi

gr8 story...mwahaha they died...um cough cough

keep it up babe, its reeli good

love always and forever CAT!
silver lightening
2004-10-24 . chapter 1
ooh scary
i memba u telling me bout this a while ago but i'd 4gotten bout it
it's very good
rite more
luv a&f
laura
xoxoxo
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