This is really nice. I love the little mention that she can't remember what the song is, that's so sad but Ichigo can turn it all around into an endearing moment! Really great, and really sweet!

Rukia's ignorance of the human world is always priceless! And Ichigo contemplating Rukia's love of bunnies was hilarious. Very nicely done!

SS

cute. i like ichigo's pov too it's written very nicely, IC.

Aw. That was also cute. XP 5/5 Stars.

Good to see Ichigo resolving the danger of leaving Rukia at Kiego's mercy!

Oh I loved it! Keigo was perfect, everything was perfect. I loved it!

cute!

this is good

This is so adorable.

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Aw, cute. I love it D:

I like the way you write. You are seriously catching their characters SPOT ON (well... I think you are at least)!

Aw - you portray Ichigo just PERFECTLY. His gruffness yet his subtle kind of caring and worry for Rukia, you write it just perfectly. I especially loved his guilt for making her stop humming, and then the line, "Well, it doesn't matter. You're making new memories now." That is so sweet - it's like he's saying that she belongs here now anyway, and just squee!

The carnival theme is typically overused and everything, but you just seem to have breathed fresh life into it. Wonderful - I love your stories! *squee*

GAH! You did it again, simply wondeful my dear :)!

Ichigo makes Rukia-chan happy

So... Adorable... GAHH! I am rapidly become a fan of your little story-lets. you should collect them under one fanfiction, like an anthology of sorts or something. Again, Lovely story!

Luna