Well written and explored short piece, once again, nicely done.

...I think there's a voice in my head that's screaming.

Ohgod. o.o

Amazing imagery, really exceptional. I was a little confused at first but when I read it again it made sense and I was pleasantly shocked. I love dark, angsty peices like this. You should definately write more!

Whoa...

The darkest thing I've read in a while, this piece was striking in its imagery and haunting in the movement of the plot. The way things are set up in the beginning and gradually culminate throughout make for an extremely impactful ending when the realization of what has happened hits.