I really liked your writing style. You should continue this. :)

poor kakashi,
no smut for him

It is beautiful... you go real slow and easy witht he story. I love you characterisation of Iruka!

Are you writing more? Cause I'm all for a continuation! *wibbles* I love the interaction between them! Please say you'll continue it! ~Pi

That was pretty good.

loved it. just... loved it.
baibai>yukie

nice. interesting story. keep writing.

well written. ^_^

Wack! Are you going to continue this? Oh, please do. I love the way you write. It's so...hm...pretty? Aesthetically pleasing? Rhythmically pleasing? Something like that. Regardless, I like.

Thats so cute! It made me giggle.
You are really good at keeping your characters in character. My compliments.

Is this going to be continued soon? i like it a lot!

Meh, he's right! Where is the-*gets cut off*

Ah well. Update soon! ^_^

^^ Lovely.

^__^ this is so going in the KakaIru C2 archive!

hmm...very interesting..keep it up!!