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| thecomputerroom 2006-01-11 ch 10,  | abuseI just tryed to review the repost but it would not let me. Very well done, hope you write more soon. |
| thecomputerroom 2005-04-09 ch 12, | abuseIt would be nice to see a new chapter sometime soon. |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-12-07 ch 12, | abusebeatiful. pleaze continue!! it relly good! |
| Jahar 2004-11-28 ch 11, | abuseVery cool. After Andrew's infamous line in the first chapter, I knew it was going to get better and better. |
| mystjade 2004-11-25 ch 11, | abuseSo you started the story off slowly, The slayer intrigued me, and then in the second chapter there was Andrew. My first reaction, was “oh no, why the hell did you add Andrew”. Then, before I gave up all hope, came the line that justified his presence (if not his existence): “I figured it was time to quit acting like Bruce Wayne and more like the Bat.” (You know Andrew isn't quite as repilsive, when you don’t have to look or listen to the guy. The story just kept getting better from there. I particularly liked, Conner’s search for Angel, and the plane ride(although a lot of peoples lips move when they are sleeping). Please write more. By the way, is Giles deliberately portrayed as being evil(or having a secret agenda), or am I just reading way too much into this? All in all, an excellent story. |
| thecomputerroom 2004-11-23 ch 11, | abusePlease continue. |
| Heather. V. Snape 2004-11-19 ch 10, | abuseplease continue with the story |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-11-18 ch 10, | abuseI totally love it!! Update soon!! Rock on!! Love it. |
| Heather. V. Snape 2004-11-15 ch 9, | abuseplease continue continue |
| Tyramir 2004-11-14 ch 9, | abuseHmm, not bad... Your POV's are very interesting, especially Spike's. You have his character dead on. I'm not sure how I feel about a possible Wesley resurrection. Wesley *wanted* to die. Give him a break, eh? |
| Heather. V. Snape 2004-11-11 ch 8, | abuseplease keep up the good work |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-11-10 ch 8, | abuseDat waz awesome!! continue please!! It's a really great story! |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-11-10 ch 7, | abuseHe rode on the dragon? COOL!! Go Angel! His dad? Wow interesting choice. Continue |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-11-10 ch 5, | abuseGreat story. Very edgy. Continue!! Rock on! |
| Spike'spunxrocker 2004-11-10 ch 2, | abuseDun dun dun continue! |