omfg! momo is the biggest perv in the world... and i'm friends with david! that means he is super duper perverted!! but we need this pairing. (just for the hell of it) haha!! yay... but it is too weird... i guess. but it definitely earned it's M rating. lol

~Shiroi-chan

I wonder what Kaidoh thought about getting hit in the head with the chalk. He probably acted furious but had an underlining relief that things had gone back to normal or something like normal...

I can see the two of them ending up together like that... It's an interesting idea.

Well written.

Relationship starting with mutual masturbating. Nice idea :P *giggles* These two are adorable! Please write more!! :D

i demand a sequel!!

Hahahaha, chalk.

Great story! I'm starting to like MomoKai better than InuKai. :o Love it. -Faved-

Wow...so perfectly in character, and so perfectly sexy, too ;P

awesomenes~! luved it write more plz?

Good job. Very well written. ^_^

That was really cute!! Have to admit, I'm liking MomoKai more than InuKai these days. :D

Good job!!

holy crackshnickers...that was awesome! amazing really! i couldnt take my eyes of it!

aiiaa... cute! make more please

Great!

This story is just fantastic. Sexually, romantically, everything. Nothing's too much but just perfect. Terrific!!

lols. i liked that ending. But chalk in your pocket?

anyhow, that was very well written, obviously planned, very detailed (but not boring), your own personality and flair to it. i really liked the style, even if the pairing isnt my favorite. theres nothing i can critique on, but i can applaud you on keeping VERY in character on top of the grammar and formatting. I give this a 9.5 out of ten (the .5 is just cuz o the pairing, a personal thing*

Great fic! keep on ritin on!