maybe you can do a sequel on the DCFDTL and father , like what happened to them.

Hey I just read your whole fic and I really enjoyed it

And you made Numbuh 1 more understanding reall good idea

Least Cree and Chad can relax a bit with their actual lives as good teenagers without Father ordering them about...

Who, great first chapter! And yes, I understood it was Numbuh 30C right away. ;) Besides, more people call him Kenny. But I have a feeling you were the first one to do so.

Aw, Cree and Chad are SO cute! You're really good at describing them and all the details! Awesome work! And now, I shall go read the next chapter!

That was terribly sweet, and what a great ending! I loved it! I loved it! I loved it! Great job. Yes, and I do think you have to make this a trilogy! Woo! That would rock!

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ahhelga
aka Pauline

Hi Bizarro!
And I thought your fanart was amazing! This is great. Its most definatly one of the best stories on You should put a link from your sight to your fanfics! You will get more reviews.
Jools

Wow, and I thought your artwork was the only thing I've seen that's amazing. This was great stuff here! I can't wait for the sequel!

cant say i understand it, but then again i am pretty tired... so does this mean that there will be a traitor among the dcfdtl? i cant wait for the sequel... man i gotta stop using those dots...

wow... powerful... poor 4 got squished... =P btw, whats a golden plot bunnie? y it not a fishie? or a squirrley? ^_^ i like squirrlie...
(geez, i'm tired...)

Yeah, you better post the next chapter quicker! It's making me terribly sad to see that you haven't updated! Ah well. Great job. It's developing it's plot beautifully.

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ahhelga
aka Pauline

This story is great. I have no words to describe it. Plesse update soon.

FINISH IT! AH! cant... wait... so... LONG! (hehe, i'm dying here, i need to know what happens!)

man, this is good...

wow, i'm impressed.. converting 30 celsius to 86 farenheit... now, convert to kelvin for me... (heck, i'll even do it for ya! 303 degrees kelvin)

poor kenny... he deserved it tho! i kno i would have decked him if it were me!

My heart stopped when I saw those last few sentences (luckily, I'm still alive!), whoa. Awsome job! I cannot believe it! Well...Nigel is saved. That's happy things to rejoice about. Dude. Everything else sucks. (Not story wise, of course.)
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ahhelga
aka Pauline