why the hell did he kill himself?! gods...i'm so confused!!

wow, scary how i can relate...

All I can say is that there better be a damn sequal.
Otherwise, there's no point.

Erm... why DID he want to kill himself? Well, I thought it was ok. I guess I'll read the sequel then!

OH THAT IS SO SAD!

WHAT THE $#*! WAS THAT! Inuyasha would never do that. I don't mean to be rude our mean but that is messed up.O_o *sigh* Oh well on a scale from 1 to 6 I give you a 4 for the drama in it.

Wow.

It's okay. Needs work...

Who is he talking to? Otherwise, very nice.

Hey sissy. Inu-yasha wouldn't kill himself! He's too busy being obnoxious and brooding about Kikyo and trying to kill Naraku. He wouldn't leave Kikyo behind now, would he? Huh, huh, huh? I'm happy because I can say whatever I want because I'm your sister!! MUAHAHA!!

holy hell! poor Inu-kun! well i can't blame him. his life sucks! but he would never do that. he knows he would hurt kagome and he would never hurt her. and one stab wound wouldn't kill him right? i mean i've him with a hole in his gut and he still beats whoever he's fighting. i talking more to myself than you but whatever.

side note: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING MY STORY! i would have never updated without your little "push" keep reading and writing!
-Taylor

DOn't understand you... btw, Zora, you rock! You also seem to be something close to my twin, minus the fact that I'm 14... and your sister is weird... and I really want know what Kikyo has to do with coconuts.
Because that's my nickname. Coco for chocolate, nut for (almost) exactly what I am. Although ironicly I hate all nuts.
Anyways slightly sad story, Might have been better if you said why he was comiting suicide... ?

Wow...very scary. It was good but I think you should've expounded more on the things running through Inuyasha's head while he was contemplating suicide to add more to the dark mood of this piece.

All in all, it was nice. Keep it up!!

My God, my tourniquet.
Return to me salvation
my wounds cry for the grave,
my soul cries for deliverance
will I be denied?
Tourniquet
My suicide

If it's not Tetsusaiga talking, who is? And pretty good story, though there's not nearly enough description. You need to add more 'Inuyasha thinking in agony' junk. Jaa ne!

Doshita, Inuyasha? [imitates IY] Plfft!

LOL is tetseyega talking? i think u could add more description but cool idea anyways