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| HooterSampzon13 2006-01-29 ch 1,  | abuseOkay, here goes: What the HELL are you thinking making Nigel give Jordan a glass of water? Have you ever been drunk before? That will ** someone up even worse than they already are. Coffee. You always give them COFFEE... Other than that minor detail (asides from a few minor details), great fanfic. Write more. |
| Mac3 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, this really deserves a second chapter to see how the following day goes between Jordan and Nigel. Great work as always. Looking forward to more stories from you. |
| eternalgorithm 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abusecute |
| Tanya 2005-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story!! We all need more Nigel and Jordan... |
| toostupidforyou 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseAwe. This could go far. Update it please. |
| Connie1 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey i think you have the right idea... i really think that jordin and Nigel are good together, i really think they make a good couple keep up the good work |
| CeredwenFlame 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseOh good... you must continue... what else happens between them? You can't just tease me like this! |
| catgirl_89 2005-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw!! I thought this story was just so sweet! I really, really liked it ;)! |
| jigenslove 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseooh, i really liked this story, though truthfully, im not a big nigel/jordan fan. i really like the fact that they didnt sleep together, which seems to be a common element in most n/j fics where they get drunk. anywho, nice job and i hope to see more work... |
| Lexi 2005-01-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this! N/J is a sadly dyimg ship =) please write more! |
| aratcorien 2004-11-09 ch 2, | abuseOuch. My inner Jordan is bleeding right now. the ending was horrible. I LOVE IT! The effect of Jordan's emotional instability was extrordinary. You are doing such a great job. Keep up the work, it's awesome. Poor Nige. Poor Jordan. Poor Dad. . . I wonder what fun that could be had at the office. Lots of, I'm sure. ~ Ara |
| whalersfan 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, very nice... I'm not typically a J/N fan, but I love your writing. I can't wait to see where this one ends up! |
| screwydame 2004-11-07 ch 2, | abuseGotta admit I liked the first chapter better. Jordan is right - everything IS happening at warp speed, but only where the pace of the story is concerned. Slow it down a little and don't forget to describe emotions in detail! And if Nigel thinks Jordan's bagel is weird, he never met my mother's co-worker, who liked strawberry cream cheese on her GARLIC bagels! Abbey :) |
| BE-A-TLE (To lazy to log in... 2004-11-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell, I just have to say, this story is simply wonderful. Man you sure have Jordan down. I could see her reacting just like that. Good job. Poor Nigel..he's gonna suffer isn't he. I can't wait to see more! |
| Aesear 2004-11-06 ch 2, | abusevery nice! I like the second chapter even better than the first I think. You're starting to get a real flow here. You have a good feel for jordan's emotions and the whole "morning after" sequence seems very natural, in all of its awkward should-I-or-shouldn't-I 'ness that jordan does every time she gets in a relationship. Definately I think you have something with this though and you should pursue it as far as it will go! |