|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| eridani 4/25/05 . chapter 9
OMG- this is one of the craziest fics I've ever read! And here I thought that after years of reading weird Buffy and science fiction fanfics I had left all that behind in the very solid world of JAG. HA! Surpassed in eccentricity only by a story I read years ago where Harm ends up a vampire... yeah, a vampire.
However, dont let my having said that detract from your story. Make no mistake- I had a blast reading it.
| starryeyes10 12/26/04 . chapter 9
| FoxyWombat 11/25/04 . chapter 9
Wow...these last too chapters were amazing...actually the entire fic was. The entire idea was extremely creative and I loved the way you wrapped everything up in the end. Great job!
| Cathy F 11/24/04 . chapter 9
I have to thank you for this wonderful story. This is one of the best Harm/Mac stories I have ever read. It was just so original!
| emmybuns696 11/24/04 . chapter 9
OMG! SO GOOD! It's a little depressing to see the story over, but you did an INCREDIBLE job! Can't wait for your next story!
| Jackia 11/24/04 . chapter 9
Made me almost cry at the end... I loved this FF, but I would like it better if Mac and Harm get together still being alive...
Hope you write something soon!
| BrokenSkye 11/24/04 . chapter 9
Aw... how cute!
Well, that's done and dusted... what's next?
| zeilfanaat 11/24/04 . chapter 9
ah, that was really sweet!
Very well done.
| Radiorox 11/24/04 . chapter 9
Great story! Glad they figured it out. :)
| Cathy F 11/19/04 . chapter 7
I have to say this is one of the best stories I have ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| serendipity112233 11/18/04 . chapter 7
HAHA! Simon went to Hell! You write this so friggin amazingly! You are so talented!
| Navy Babe 11/18/04 . chapter 7
YAY! Simon's gone! And he got what he deserved! Poor Mats though, almost being killed and all. Hm...so if forgiving Simon didn't bring them closure wonder what will? *grins* I think I have an idea, but I guess that I'll just have to wait and see if I'm right! I can't wait until the next chappie!
| Radiorox 11/18/04 . chapter 7
Wow! Great chappie. I hope they try the whole Ouijaboard contact thing eventually. Can't wait for more! J.
| zeilfanaat 11/18/04 . chapter 7
Please update soon!
| jtbwriter 11/18/04 . chapter 7
That is so incredibly intense-and horrible of that Simon to hurt Mattie that way!
I hope Mac finally saw how Harm would do anything to care for the woman he loves through eternity-and maybe that's their key?
Thanks for a great update-now what?