loved it!

hmm very nice -though too bad you couldn't have done the runup to that as well

that's really simple and nice Aww pure fluff love it hehe write more hehe

xD Hey! I've read what you have of your YnM story "Abandoned," and I was kind of sad taht you didn't update for a long time. It was the best, most well-written and interesting YnM fic I've read so far.

When I looked into your profile, I was pleased to see that you haven't given up writing!

xD This story was short, but very captivating. Keep up the good work!

I liked the sudden feel of this - it's a short piece, but it dives right into the thick of the moment, showing an instantaneous bit of emotion and interaction. It was quite well-written, and I liked your vocabulary. My only suggestion would be to change the first "he" to "Tsuzuki" so we as readers have a way of orienting ourselves when the story begins. Wonderfully done!

hanyan! so cute :) nice ficlet :)

That was so cute. A bit fluffy, but adorable!

AW that was sweet

sugoi! everything that defines the principle of parsimony. clear, short and sweet.:)

Cripes, you're at MIT? You MUST tell me how to get in...preferably before November 1st, seeing as how that's the deadline for my application.

The first three paragraphs were confusing, especially since there wasn't a real context to relate them to. The summary helped, but I was still kind of confused about who was talking, especially when Hisoka smiled. Surely, he wouldn't be smiling if someone was yelling at him, would he? But the rest of the ficlet flowed smoothly and was very good (if a little OOC), and I'm impressed you've managed to find time to write/find/edit fanfics as a college freshman

*sniff* that was good... *clutches ficlet tightly before placing WolfPilot06-san into favvies*

So sweet

Aww...so cute.

Poor Hisoka... ; . ;