i dont think im sane...this made perfect sense to me. but i guess i already knew that iwasnt sane so its all good.

Elegantly written, totally alien and yet so plausible.

ok, i understand nothing, so i gues i'm *sane*.
but anyway, that was a really beautiful story. you're good with description. i liked that!

I guess I'm not sane, I understood that. Such fluid writing, rich and poetic without being garish. And props to you for using insensate and aquarelles! I've never seen anyone use those. There were some spelling mistakes (AKA wolfs instead of wolves) and typos, but beyond that, a stunning piece of writing.

So I'm not sane. I love the Malfoy family. Nice to see a view of The End from Lucius' point of view. Dark but beautiful. Very in character.

Brilliant. I love how you made Lucius's rational seem reasonable. I can see his point, and I can understand a glimmer of why he must do what he does. I loved it. I'm adding it to my favorites!