please update

I encourage you to continue. This is simply one word: AMAZING.

Will Sarah have a baby? Please turn this into a 100 chaptered story. I really like it.

If she does have a baby, how about Trey for the name?

hey..this is an UBER good story..you need to finish it QUICK!..im UBER excited to know whats gonna happen!..so plzz hurry!

This is going to be a good story!

this story is AMAZING. u gotta continue plz update plz pretty plz. I love this story and the grammar ur using is amazing. Keep up the good work.

love

skaterchick

this is my first fanfic i read from hte catagory. So this is good so far. (its my favorite movie!) Very interesting plot... Keep it up! Kelsey

the first chapter sucked ass reallt bad but the end was really good but you really need to work on your writing skills really really bad cause your on a scale of one through ten and right now u r at 3 for the first chapter but a 7 for the second

its alright but sarah would never sleep with him

story plot is total never happen scit. good grammer but bad plot

that was good

please tell me if they are going to get together or is sarah going to be with malakai?

please keep going...

love your work so far

u got me wondering whats going to happen next... please keep up the good work

Intersting story...I can't wait to see where you go with this. Kirsten

Oh god, what shall I say :p? Congrats to you for writing your first fanfic or congrats to me for corrupting you? BOTH! *squee squee woot woot*! Whe! Loff the chapter, want more!