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| Jax9 2008-03-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseKeep Writing! |
| Lil-lo 2008-03-04 ch 2,  | abuseThe line about that long boring period when bars was closed was really great. I also liked your reasoning on the 3rd using outside women to take care of Naruto. I got a little emotional at the end when Naruto was talking to Tsunade, but you have some good balance with moods. Sometimes the story gets a little wordy in some descriptive parts like when Tsunade went back into reflecting on Shizune, but I love your work and I'm not trying to offend. |
| Lil-lo 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI am happy with this because I assumed you were writing a parody and what you have promises to be so much more. The set-up was great- this is a good part in the story line to introduce this original idea and the way you described Anko's pain on the birth,got me emotionally charged. the only thing I'm confused about is all of the rookie nine being in the hospital since they were all born in different months. I can ignore it for the story if I need to. |
| Just Call Me Feather 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseWas Anko old enough to have a child at the Kyuubi attack? And, are you just throwing out all the hints in the manga/anime that say the Yondaime is his dad? |
| Twilit Wanderer - Dusk 2007-08-31 ch 3, | abuseThis story is great, however... I lack the words to describe how twisted Anko's house is... but yet that suites her perfectly. Why Naruto doesn't look like Anko: The sealing jutsu didn't5 seal the Kyuubi's soul in the stomach of the death god, so it didn't seal Yondaime's either. The fourth's soul merged with Naruto, and that's why he doesn't look like Anko, and why he looks so much like the Yondaime. Pretty good for something I just made up, huh? |
| Wolfgirl13 2007-08-03 ch 3, | abuseI really like this theory! Definitly a new and unique idea. Please don't forget this! You can add so much. Thanks a bunch! |
| LazyBumForever 2007-06-29 ch 3, | abuse*grins* Love it. Is awesome-ness on a stick. :D |
| Hasamaki 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuse-drool- Another story! I'm a little kid at heart ;) |
| Raziel Tepes 2007-02-26 ch 3, | abuseOy, Care to update some time ? It's a pretty nice fic you have there, it would be a waste to let it rot away... |
| Dezy-X29 2007-02-13 ch 3, | abuseT_T WAI SO CUTE! In a scary... anko-ish sorta of way? Aw wai wai! :D |
| openwindow3 2006-11-06 ch 3, | abuse** AWESOME! |
| moshi95 AKA sherley C. 2006-10-17 ch 3, | abusewhos the dad you could have least givin us a clue or something nice story though. |
| Demonic-Little-Angel 2006-10-06 ch 3, | abuseLol! Anko as his mother? Whoa. Crazy ness is in the genes eh? |
| Ivellios 2006-10-04 ch 3, | abuseThis is funny and interesting. Unfortanately it doesn't appear you are going to update this anytime soon. Oh well. Maybe you will. I hope you do! |
| Blargh 2006-09-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo...is this story dead? Cause it's been a year or so since we've seen anything on it. Which sucks, cause I kinda like Anko as Narutos mother/sister/etc fics. Ah well |