That was insightful, brilliantly and expressively written! You have really captured what drives Bakura to seek his form of twisted justice. The soliloquy was wonderful, truly a reflection of the person created through isolation. Its really nice to find a well read author too!

that was good !
very well written !

...Great...

Yet another good thing by you! ^_^

*is on a flaed-fic-reading-spree* ... (OO) col...i thought it was very emotional... *nodnod*... well...for me it was ... XD i have no idea how that makes sense... kohaku needs sleep...her brain does not function at this time of day...night...WHATEVER!

poor bakura... i never thought of him as a person who would express emotion..in any form...at all... but i guess it is slightly different when you're speaking to an inanimate object...

if you are expecting my opinion, i thought it was the utter quintessence of brilliance and portrays your broad range of talents amongst very different genres of writing... (OO) *blink blink*...what did i just say?...(OO) *blink*

welps! it is to bed with me! (^^) great writing, flaed! keep it up! i'm sure you are very proud of this story.

angelkohaku

Because the Wolfy is too lazy to login.

...Wow. ...Just... Wow. @_@ You know that thing about all Flaed fics being good?? This one is good. @_@ *tries to remember to add to favorites when she next logs on*

From what I know about Thief Bakura (And you know how little of the Egypt arc I've read, so this might not be very comforting... XD) he seemed very in character. ^_^ ...This seems like it would have been LOADS of fun to write. Insanity... ^_^ Yay.
...I've actually seen and read that part... I like the mummy thing better, too... Dragging a coffin like that just seemed sorta... Improbable.

But yeah. I like the psycho Thief ranting.
...The whole mood of the fic reminds me of this dream I had... Which is really freaky... O_o

Oh! Oh, that was good!! Yay!

Though the scary thing is, it has an uncanny resemblance to something I wrote a few months ago. Never published it, because the info was ALL WRONG.

Oh, but it was good!

AAH!! MY SESSION WILL TIME OUT IN 20 MINUTES!! (freaks out) (Hates Library Computers)

But write more. ... come to think of it, I haven't seen you for two weeks. Oh Flaed, where art thou?

Well, let's see...you quoted C.S. Lewis and Homer, and copied Tolkien out into your bio, plus you wrote wonderful Thief King Bakura fic. I think I've found a new friend! *hugs*

Seriously, I like the tone of this story. It has exactly the right balance between truth and insanity. Also, I felt very near to the scene, as if I was hiding under an ebony senet table. Very well done.

Yc2008:;.; o poor baby *pates Bakura head *

Bakura:*hugs yc2008* ;.; all i wanted was some one to care ...I LOVE U MOMMY

yc2008:I love u too honey;.;

Yami : O.O; what wronge with this picture?

Joey: o o o i know his hairs the wronge color ^_^

Yami: *pats joeys head* u poor poor boy