So...the ghost of "brother John" tries to kill children and bring himself back with the toy? Or is the funeral for the childhood of Seto and Mokuba? I'm confused here.

Creepy! I think my favorite line was "like a huntsman," I really started paying attention to what I was reading after that. I think I need to read it again because I got Frere Jacques stuck going through my head up until Kaiba was taking the dog away to hide. :) Okay, I didn't miss anything, I thought maybe I missed some signs of unrest from Mokuba that led to the removal of the dog. Cool scene at the hospital, too, though a little confusing. There are three coffins, so is one the kid Fido used to belong to, some unknown dead kid? Weirdness, an evil evil music box. :) Very nice story, nicely written, nice creepiness, very cool overall. And thanks for the link to the music, I don't know if I find it creepy exactly, but oft repeated by my little brother might make it creepier. :)

I like the irony in this, I also really like how you tied it in with Seto, him being a gamer himself.

That dream sequence really creeped me out. I assume from reading it, that sealed coffin repersents Seto as a child.
The one who loved the toys, along with Mokuba; however, as time went on, they disregared these toys and went on to bigger things. And they, the rejected were having a funeral for them both. Yet, only Mokuba remembers the old toys, which is why the music box, and that really creepy dog was bought.

In the end, Seto is laughing because he overcame it, just like everything else, and that fantasties will not consume him...or I could be making that up.

One thing that could be different could be the name. In Japan, the common name for dogs is Jon. Might make it creepier in my opinion, but that's just nitpicking.

Great story the suspense was well kept, and everything flowed with the plot. Your sense of irony was excellent.
I loved it.

~Rosemary Greene

i don't get it...

Quite creepy, but good.

[joke at a time like this?]

As far as I know, shouldn't the J be captilized.

["You the toy, is all," she answered.]

I don't really get the sentence. Perhaps I missed something but is that the way it is supposed to be written?

[roomCbut]

Just a small error. Happens all the time when uploading, unfortunately.

Like I said, very creepy! *shudders*

Wow, that was REALLY creepy.

BTW I think it's dormez-vous. I seem to remember that commands in the inverted form like that are held together by a -. But it's been years since I took French.

Damn. WTF was going on? That was GOOD!

OMG! O.O This is one of the best horror fics I've seen in a long time. Please write more horror fics! ^.^

halo! kohaku recomended this one, so i read it! its good! i like it!! creepy though o.O hehe ^^;

(OO) *stares at cookie*...

(^^) this was so freakishly awesome, flaed!! you are definitely a person of many talents... It's amazing!! (^^) this fic had me laughin' ... and then it just had me plain scared out of my wits... (@@) *clings to teddy bear*...

(==) my english class is studying irony... but somehow, it doesn't seem all that bad anymore... XD

(^^) just thought i'd leave ya a little note tellin' ya that i thought this fic was most definitely one of the best ones i've read. . . you're stories just keep getting better and better!!

angelkohaku

yay for confusingness. and kaiba acting nuts(then again, he's always acting nuts). and a really creepy ending(never thought i'd see ones of those coming from you, bye the bye. i'm not complaining though^_^)

Still too lazy to login.

...Well, that was odd.

And creepy. And yet cool. @_@

I liked it... *shivers* Creepy creepy creepy... *sideways glance at the ceramic poodle figurine she found at an antique store* ._. DON'T HURT ME, POODLE!

Dangit. Now you've gone and made me all paranoid...
AH! JACK WILL PROTECT ME!! *brandishes Doberman Pinscer(or however you spell that) plushie* *brandishes a weasel, otter, and various other dog and fox plushies, just for good measure*

I ought to be going to sleep now... ._. Meep. I'm gonna have some odd dreams...

Thumbs up for the highly creepy fic, Flaedy-Flaed!

._. Meep...

Oh, man. I listened to Frere Jacques in minor when I came home from the medieval festival, and it was SO! DARN GOOD!! WOW!! SU!

^.^ Oh, but this was good! Creepy, but good!

*_* Creepy... with a capital C. (I just love creepiness like that... ^^) And that was for me...? *huggle-tackle-glomp* Thanks! Very many thanks for writing that, and even more for writing it to me... Though, are you trying to make me scared of my stuffed animals? Good thing I don't have any music boxes...

I read this earlier today but didn't have time to review then cause I had a meeting... just guess what song has been playing in my mind all the day? As it is, I don't _need_ any ebil music boxes. Though I can't turn it into minor key... (I think I _almost_ made it once, for a short time...)

*another glomp* Thank you so much again! That's one great piece of writing. ^^ (And birthday girls get cookies whether they figure anything out or not. *grins and snatches some*)

(...I'd pay much to hear Kaiba singing 'din, din, don'... ^~)

*hums tone*

Kabia:>.<

*hums louder*

Kabia: >O< *stomps feet*

*hums louder *

Kabia * stomps harder * stop it stop it STOMP* falls threw hole* it

Yami:>.> nowisn't that the most unoriganial thing..

Yc2008: *walk up it Yami * ..*slaps him* ...*walks away(

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