Hmm. I've read this before, but never reviewed... But.. Hah!

It wasn't to sad.. But I liked the happy ending! ;)

*bored*

*reads*

I did this somewhere else... oh well, good story!

You really have a keen and a happy mind... too bad that i don't write such happy stories. Oh well. Nicely done even if a one shot. Let the idea strike you soon but not hard anough to keep you from typing more

Anda can you read my 'Age of mythology'?

See its stories like this that lets me know that you have a lot of imagination... Tell me when that idea hits you!

Good quickie!

P.S. READ MY STORIES LOL

Golbez: DUDE! At least my story made you cry...

I didn't even feel my heart beat oh well too bad.

It was good tho dont get me wrong.