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| disot 2005-03-30 ch 2, anon. | abusethat sucked |
| Nik 2005-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseMay I smack the reviewer who just said it was horrible without offering any suggestions? That was rude. It did need more polish, especially on the vocabulary. But, it had a plot and I could follow it. Thus, it wasn't horrible. You may, however, want to think about the plausibility of them all being off. It might work better if Catherine and Warrick just happened to have the same night off. This is a good early attempt. P.S. I hope that I don't get that same reviewer after I post my first fan fic. |
| Christieanne-Anna 2005-02-17 ch 2,  | abuseyou might want to cut down on the word'said'. |
| Fighting-this-War 2005-02-02 ch 2, | abuseerm...the writing was vague..very vague..and the dialogue is basic, i normally like CW stories but i'm not keen on this, sorry. |
| MikaelaCheryl 2005-01-07 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter's great!! Well done. |
| drama-freak-csim 2004-12-20 ch 2, | abuseAw sweet. I'm as aussie so far behind on the new csi eps and when I read the summary I was like, "what, they almost kissed" can't wait to see that ep. hope you add to your story |
| Christieanne-Anna 2004-10-31 ch 1, | abuseTBC means that you have to write more! |
| Grissom's Monarch Butterfly 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abusecontinue please |
| MikaelaCheryl 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is interesting!! Great that it's gonna be continued - did they nearly kiss in Season 5? Cos it hasn't been shown over here yet, lol. |
| somebody or other 2004-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is HORRIBLE writing |