I have a question. How is this a Ryo and Ruki fic?

I would have logged in but my computer's wacky...so...yeah.

anyway, i like your story...okay, really liked...but you should probably try to make your summary a little more...attractive. Get some flashing lights and some Polish hookers or something.

Anywho, other than lowering the rating (i don't think language really doesn't mean it needs to be M. then again i haven't actually read their policy for that kind of thing...)

you should also, you know, update every now and again. It's just a thought. 'Cause if you don't i'm going to have to start bugging you until you do and that's not very pretty, y'know?

So, anyway, again, I really like your story and you need to update!

This is great. I can't wait for more...

just one question what ever happened to the dog

Not bad. I can see where the story's going.

Sorry. Usually I would write more, but it's too late at night. I'd just have to say, make it more clear when you're putting it in first POV or third POV to avoid confusion. I suggest italics for the first POV.

Keep writing. It's coming along nicely.