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Queen Nightshade
2009-11-18 . chapter 1
...Woah! This is by far the best Ghost Rider story in the archives ^^
Your style of writing is splendid, and you really capture the dark, chilling atmosphere. I held my breath when reading this!
Your imagery is vivid and tangible, and very nice, almost with an etheral quality.
This is most definetly going to favs! :D
Andromakhe
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
What an elegant fic. It's going into my favorites for sure. Chilling and perfectly textured.
PhantomWriter2.0
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
Wow...that was absolutely amazing. I loved the characters, the description of the Ghost Rider and Grace, everything. The imagery detailing was exceptional. Of course you did it justice! I've never read a better Ghost Rider story. I'm dead serious (bad pun intended).
no one
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
excellent story. u really captured the spirit of a story told by the fireside. in some ways it outshined the movie in my oppinion. i could picture it perfectly.
one thing i'll mention is my concern for ur use of "**" and "nigger".
while i believe u used them to effectively portray the character, many people may find them offensive and assume that u are a racist.
i'd like to believe that ur not, so i'll continue to believe that u used them for character purposes.
again, an excellent story
Nightmare Anatomy
2007-11-17 . chapter 1
at the risk of sounding like a prep...omygod! seriously, this story left me gaping at the computer. I love the way you wrote how they spoke - I really felt that you captured how they would speak like. it was so vivic! and awesome!
Topgallant
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
Again you show me your fantastic talent at writing. Your characters, though we only meet them briefly, show distinct personalities, and their dialogue was brilliant.

I found /myself/ getting enraptured in Cap's story, and I can't help but feel like I want more!

Excellent!
Jason
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
This story was totally freaking sweet. Please write another.
SithelfJen
2007-09-06 . chapter 1
That was one of the best GH stories I have ever read.
I can picture a bunch of men shooting the breeze about Ghost Rider.
Have a cookie!
Mike-045
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
That was...simply incredible. The language was easily siuted to the characters, and it really captures the feel of a "modern" Western ghost story...
Bravo!
Cheers,
-mike
Quazie89
2007-08-04 . chapter 1
Awesome story! Your writing style puts me in the mind of Stephen King, who just happens to be one of my favroite authors! Could you please review my Ghost Rider story? I'm pining for reviews here!
Are You Afraid of the Dark
2007-08-02 . chapter 1
:o

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I LOVE YOU!

Dudue! One of the Coolest things I've ever read, no joke!
Death Jester
2007-07-07 . chapter 1
great stuff. REALLY. I liked this a lot. I think the middle dragged a little, but it was well worth it. Very well done, and you captured the feel of a campfire story perfectly. There's really not much that can be changed to make this better.

Wonderful work!

Signed;

Your Friendly Neighborhood Death Jester
satsu
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
That was AMAZING! It gave me chills, and was so wonderfully told.
I hope to see you wright again in this fandum.

Satsu
BabyInu 317
2007-07-01 . chapter 1
kool
ColtDancer
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
Now that was just downright FABULOUS to read. I thank you for sharing it. As I read, I could hear the dialogue and story-telling, much like it was being played out as a movie. I could even hear the fire all the riders were gathered around, crackling in the darkness. The voices were distinct. The story was haunting. And I think you captured the spirit of the fandom QUITE well.

Please say that you're penning more additions to this genre??
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