Yup! This describes Black Lady very well! Good job, I'm off to go read the rest of your stuff, Mwhahaha! Ja!
Princess Silver Serenity
(aka Princess Anastasia on SSUK forums)

*stares in amazement* wow. ^.^ that was such a good poem thingy! i luved it! and even though i haven't seen a whole lot of sailor moon, i really got the feeling of what black lady was thinking. u did a great job on this, u really got her perspective down really well. ^.^ sorry i'm late in reviweing, but again, excellent work. ^.- til next time ja ne!

I love this poem, 10/10 for it :D
good work!

That was great! Pretty deep too. You conveyed the emotions very well, I could almost feel them. You are very good at poetry. Keep it up!

wow... that was so... wow. ^__^ I loved it! It was brilliant- Isn't school the best place to come up with fanfics? that IS where most of mine from... That and lying awake in the middle of night- the darkness of night is great for coming up with stories.I loved it- it was very believable! You could almost see her, reciting it herself! well done! ^_^

Wow! Cool poem!

Keep it up! ^_^

That was pretty good. I'm not really into Sailor Moon, but I have to say that even someone who doesn't know what that's about would understand that. You should write more like this.