oh my god wow, that was so good it really did seem like it was Canard talking, you showed his feelings so well! In other words I loved it!

This was awesome. I, personally, don't like Canard all that much, but you portrayed him wonderfully. You could feel what he was feeling, it was great.

There are a couple of grammatical errors, but nothing that can't be easily fixed.

Have a great day!

Absolutely brilliant character piece. Once again, you did truly amazing working. You truly are an awesomely talented writer. The first person viewpoint was very realistic given the circumstances and the "'looking back'" parts were all quite well done. :)

Nice story. Poor Canard. I hope you continue this.