 torral11 2007-05-23 . chapter 4I think you should put that that Dagger fights the Titans but Robin dosent recognised him and pretends they both pretend and he hurst Starfire and then he realises that he loves her I hoped you liked the idea Please update soon |
 milkshakelvr 2006-12-18 . chapter 4YOU SHOULD DO ONE WHERE THEY FIGHT SOME KIND OF VILLAN AND ROBIN TAKES NOTES. BUT RAVEN, BEING AN EMPATH ( IF U DICIDE TO MAKE HER ONE IN YOUR STORY) COULD SENSE THINGS ROBIN IS TRYING TO HIDE, SO SHE INVESTIGATES IN HIS ROOM AND FIND THINGS ROBIN WOULDN'T WANT HER TO FIND. ;D HEE HEE JUST AN IDEA... IT IS A GREAT STORY.! |
 faya27 2006-09-06 . chapter 4Do idea number 1. |
 beautyqueen15 2006-04-11 . chapter 4sisters penname not mine...but anyways i think you should like have them like, um, well fight a small villian but like they all get their weaknesses exposed and then, robin gives it to dagger and the um, thrird mission or whatever should be like, something having to do with starfire like um, dagger wanting to kill all the titans, maybe starfire first or something like that... these are just ideas i came up with on the top of my head! dont hurt me if you dont like 'em!
oh yea and i luvs this story! (i have to give ya praise!)
remember: this is my sisters penname, im getting one soon! on my b-day! |
 #1Swimmer 2005-10-06 . chapter 4 I got with # 1 50% and # 2 60%. I don't knoe just do anything i like anythin happenin |
 crazyfrog 2005-09-04 . chapter 4dude totli the 1st 1! + plez upd8 soon im really hooked on ur story!! |
 Merry Monarch 2005-08-18 . chapter 4maybe just a regular fight with some villian like plasmus or killer moth. either way whatever u decide is fine cuz its ur story. |
 starfire 2005-06-17 . chapter 4 o pick me like make star and rob have a moment and kiss and then robin changes his whole mind and lets down dagger dagger comes and starfire realizes what happened it takes two secs while they are in battle she runs up to robin says i love you leaving him in stillnes and star destroys dagger and robin starfire live happily ever after |
 CheriBeri 2005-05-14 . chapter 4If u ask me i think this is really great and i think like,Starfire would kiss him or sumthin and if this story is like bit short then wat i think u should do that later in the Story,He should tell her or in the 4rth chappie and u no she gets heartbroken or understands but deep down she's real angry.OR mayb he QUITS or um...think,think,think or Dagger tells them the truth or maybe she eavsdrops him and realisses he's the bad guy or they might make out for a few chappie's and he becomes best freinds with Raven after he tells his feellings for star...But it's a REALLY GOOD STORY! |
 Rin8790 2005-05-04 . chapter 4Number 2...!! i think its cooler!!
wahahhaa!
and make more robstar!
IM SUGAR HIGH!
ITS SUPPER COL!!
ok,i'll shut up |
 Earth Magician 2005-05-04 . chapter 4okay, writersblock? you've come to the right address ;) just sign up here: wielder_of_fire@
okay, just kidding.
now, why don't you combine your ideas? Have them fighting Dagger, Robin pretending he doesn't know him, and taking notes on the Titans while they're fighting him. And afterwards they'd be wondering who this new character called Dagger is. Robin would pretend to be just as clueless, all the while taking notes of their personality outside of combat as well as inside. Where they're vulnerable and when. And most importantly: their secret identities. And he can ask then about everything because he's their leader. He has to know how to best direct them in battle after all. ;) So you could have him taking mental notes while showing them in day-to-day life. And slowly they become more and more dependant on him.
He decides to check out how they fight without him leading them. so, he pretends to be really sick once when they have to fight Cinderblock, then goes out in a different disguise taking notes, then slips back into the tower while they're bringing Cinderblock back to prison and changes back into his Robin outfit.
The next day he tells his Teammates that the day of rest really did him good and that he's feeling better.
Since it's the one month/6 month/one year (you choose) aniversary for the Titans that day, they reveal their true identities. Robin is prepaired though and has brown contact lenses in (his eyes are actually blue) and gives them a false identity, while taking mental notes of the Titans real ones and their non-Titan hobbies and occupations. (kinda like Terra did in the comics)
All the while he's pretending that Dagger is his main enemy and his one aim is to beat him. But in reality, whenever they're fighting alone he slipps him data chips on the Titans with the newest information he's gathered. They decided that that was safer than trying to do it via comlink or computer. Someone might walk in on Robin afterall.
Meanwhile Robin continues to have a bad feeling about all of this. And Raven continues to misstrust him, but since he's been with them so long and nothing really happened - she begins to doubt her warryness. She ends up appologizing to him for mistrusting him, after he yells at her that he can't do a good job as leader if even one of them doesn't trust him explicitly.
Finally Starfire asks him on a date. She wants to go to the 'mall of shopping' with him. She picks out clothes, then he takes her to the food court and afterwards to a movie that's showing there. Halfway through his comunicator with Dagger starts to vibrate, so he makes up an excuse that he has to go to the bathroom - and he does, but on the way he slips into a place where no one else is and answers it. He's told that he has enough information together and is ready to start phase three.
^^ if you need more ideas, then just send me an e-mail to the address at the top of this review. ^^
btw, I think that you've got a good idea for a story here, but I have noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes. ^^ |
 STARFIRE KORIAND'R 2005-05-03 . chapter 4 Um...friend i would suggest we fight this person named dagger and robin will tell dagger that he does not want to work for him anymore and he um...wins my heart? |
 STARFIRE KORIAND'R 2005-05-03 . chapter 3 Um...friend please make another one of these as you say "fan fictions" I would like to know what happens to Robin and I |
 Silverstar871 2005-05-03 . chapter 4nah, i'll go with idea #2, maybe make it a little more fluffier with Star and Robin, i'm sure Starrob fans will love that |
 CheriBeri 2005-04-29 . chapter 3morey,morey,morey!MORE it is good!VERY GOOD!IN FACT GREAT!WAIT...AMAZING!no...It is the best of ze best haha!Please keep going,*makes a cute puppydog face* |