Sequel. More Jim torture.

Interesting idea ive had the same fantasies oh cruel fate why was someone meant to be in anime stuck in the real world with no girl friend a few close friends and a god damn vivid imagination so all i can do is play the stuff out in my mind fate if i found out where u live im gonna personnally use my 15 year old hormones to kick your ** so hard youll be dieing to make things right and i can finnally be with aisha... ah sweet aisha ** me off too that everyone but jim takes her 4 granted ill kick there asses too ignoring her like that shes too hot and has to great a personality to be ignored... bastards god only if my dreams would come true id make her happy and beat the ** out of anyone who made her sad being my lineage would make me the strongest force in the universe ( too much too explain ill jus tell u ctarl ctarl ,saiyan, dragen, and jurian love those light hawk wings) well that wasnt really a reveiw more of a rant by a 15 year old boy hopped up on hormones wishing his lif could be perfect well i guess theres nothin i can do *finds a book tilted where to find fate* well maybe theres somethin i can do after all... Fate you better watch your back im coming to get you

Hehehee.. excellent. All goes according to plan.
Akari: *blink* What're you talking about now?
o.o Nothing! Good fic! Ehehehee.... *runs away*

Aw, how sweet! This is really cool! You did a great job on it!

Aww...!!! A very well written, in character and cute story! Keep writting!

SHIMATTA! I spent a FORTUNE preparing Gene's coffin! Aw man....
But anyways... *SNIFF* Beautiful.

*Giggle* I love happyness endings!!!!

HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE Poor wittle gene weeny!! HAHA!

Please keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

WOW I like it, keep on writeing!!!!!!!! ***(I'm Sorry your crush thought you were a boy....that never happened to me before, but I did trip and fall on my face in front of MY crush once...err.....OK a couple of times......Yes I'm a ditz.........:)*** ANYWHO!!!! you want a challenge, so maybe you could have some guy who has a crush on you show up and try to beat up Jimmy!!!!! ***(Sorry it wasn't a better challenge.)***

LOL Funny!!!

This is SO FUNNY! AAUUUGGHH!!!!

God I love this fic!! Plz continue it!!!! ^.~

What are you thinking! Harry's tooo cute to be blind!!! ohhhhh.......if anyone else agress e-mail me at Shingami@mtv.com or IM me at deathschild87 (aol) or grl_w_tud (yahoo!) LoVeYa!

That's cool ,but can you e-mail me when it's up dated?