 Gundum M 6/10/04 . chapter 10Sequel. More Jim torture. |
 Seric 7/29/03 . chapter 1 Interesting idea ive had the same fantasies oh cruel fate why was someone meant to be in anime stuck in the real world with no girl friend a few close friends and a god damn vivid imagination so all i can do is play the stuff out in my mind fate if i found out where u live im gonna personnally use my 15 year old hormones to kick your ass so hard youll be dieing to make things right and i can finnally be with aisha... ah sweet aisha pisses me off too that everyone but jim takes her 4 granted ill kick there asses too ignoring her like that shes too hot and has to great a personality to be ignored... bastards god only if my dreams would come true id make her happy and beat the shit out of anyone who made her sad being my lineage would make me the strongest force in the universe ( too much too explain ill jus tell u ctarl ctarl ,saiyan, dragen, and jurian love those light hawk wings) well that wasnt really a reveiw more of a rant by a 15 year old boy hopped up on hormones wishing his lif could be perfect well i guess theres nothin i can do *finds a book tilted where to find fate* well maybe theres somethin i can do after all... Fate you better watch your back im coming to get you |
 MagnaAngemon 9/1/01 . chapter 1Hehehee.. excellent. All goes according to plan.
Akari: *blink* What're you talking about now?
o.o Nothing! Good fic! Ehehehee... *runs away* |
 Jessi a.k.a. Crash 7/11/01 . chapter 10Aw, how sweet! This is really cool! You did a great job on it! |
 Aoi Kitsune 7/5/01 . chapter 10 Aww...! A very well written, in character and cute story! Keep writting! |
 Fatesmon 6/27/01 . chapter 10SHIMATTA! I spent a FORTUNE preparing Gene's coffin! Aw man...
But anyways... *SNIFF* Beautiful. |
 Alfsigesey 6/25/01 . chapter 10*Giggle* I love happyness endings! |
 Alfsigesey 6/24/01 . chapter 9HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE Poor wittle gene weeny! HAHA! |
 Alfsigesey 6/17/01 . chapter 7Please keep going!:) |
 Alfsigesey 6/3/01 . chapter 6WOW I like it, keep on writeing! ***(I'm Sorry your crush thought you were a boy...that never happened to me before, but I did trip and fall on my face in front of MY crush once...err...OK a couple of times...Yes I'm a ditz...:)*** ANYWHO! you want a challenge, so maybe you could have some guy who has a crush on you show up and try to beat up Jimmy! ***(Sorry it wasn't a better challenge.)*** |
 Kitty Kisara 4/15/01 . chapter 5LOL Funny! |
 Nerikla 4/10/01 . chapter 6 This is SO FUNNY! AAUUUGGHH! |
 KittyKisara 4/6/01 . chapter 6 God I love this fic! Plz continue it! . |
 AAaxwell 4/2/01 . chapter 5 What are you thinking! Harry's tooo cute to be blind! ohhhhh...if anyone else agress e-mail me at or IM me at deathschild87 (aol) or grl_w_tud (yahoo!) LoVeYa! |
 Alex-Ann Maxwell 4/2/01 . chapter 6 That's cool ,but can you e-mail me when it's up dated? |