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| Mossy Tea 2006-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I really liked this. The bird imagery is always great for the Hyuugas, but the third to last paragraph was just beautiful. I |
| Aventri 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, I found your story from the review you left, and I'm glad you did; otherwise I wouldn't have been able to read this WONDERFUL one-shot. "His mind's eye saw her crashing into the bars of her own cage, and he was terrified she would break her wings before the cage door would open." I loved this imagery. Please write more. "Fly, Hinata-sama. Fly for me." Such a great, and inspiring line! |
| Alina-Cantha 2004-11-17 ch 1, | abuseAh, I love the Hyuugas. I'm more of a Hinata person myself, but hey. ^^ I like this a lot. It's short and to the point, and still has meaning. A nice touch. I myself have been a little confused on what Neji's feelings towards Hinata have been post-exam. Ta dah! Great job on this. |
| Inwe[z]247 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abuseHi! I was looking around for a Neji x Hinata fiction and I found a one-shot from you. This is a great articulation of feelings story. Keep it up. It is quite heartfelt to me, especially from the 6th paragraph. I have only watched until episode 54 of the anime so I didn't understand the second last paragraph. Hopefully, there'll be more Neji x Hinata fiction in the future. - Ann[z] |
| Magicians of the Yami 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abusei really like this story! it really shows how Neji thinks... keep it up! |
| Durian 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abuseShort, but alright... Maybe more elaboration on why Neji's sudden infactution for her. |
| lexkixass 2004-10-25 ch 1, | abuseNo, I'm not reviewing my own fic; I had to delete and re-upload the thing because I needed to tweak and was being a pain and not letting me edit the fic. -_- Anyway, here are the reviews that people have left. (Yay email notifications!) ~ From: ana-yang ( ) I love the way you write! And I love Neji/Hina fics, too! - From: ewon ( ) A beautiful short story. I liked it! - From: Ah-choo ( ) That's so swet! I hope they're sweet on each other in the future. ~ Thanks, everyone, for your reviews! |