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| euphoric-acid 2008-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseloved it love the whole series. excellent writer. i like how t'pol isn't the bad guy. i mean it really wasn't her fault she had to marry koss. |
| q.thews 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSad and plausible. Ciao! |
| PadawanMage 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was very emotional and sweet. I'm glad you were able to really capture Trip's sadness with what he lost. I almost wanted to wap Archer over the head when he really tried to pry at what happened between hos two friends... Great job! |
| Rinne 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThat is one hell of a piece of writing. |
| Lee Goshabyn 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseIt was a good story. I hope it doesn't go that way on the show. But I suspect it will. Koss coming into play this season does not please me. |
| TPolTucker 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseinterestin way of portrayin what went on. I like how you wrote it. |
| neptune60 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseVery sad and beautifully written. |
| JadziaKathryn 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI must disagree with SabineHolterman- I think this is a good place to end the story. The whole situation has a lot of angst potential. (Though I still would like to smack a couple of screenwriters over the head.) You've really caught some of the angst without making it over the top. Nicely done. |
| SabineHolterman 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! I really hated it that Trip did not tell T'Pol the truth and your story really shows the pain that the two of them could be going through. Please continue this story. To me the way you wrote this, it was not ment to just end. I would really love to see how you would continue the story! Please write more! |