ah...i know i'm not good at writing my own fics (i'm not posting here yet by the way) but, uhm...i think it's pointless...it's not the exact word actually...

oh well, it's your fic anyway so you do (or write) whatever you want...

Hey, you know what? I beseech you to write another Maria story, because this site is in desperate need for it. :)

-Kaiser Washington (by the way)

‘I didn’t believe in goddesses, but now I do.’-S. Maki, Kainan.

so cheesy mehn. LOL i also loved the cameo appearance of F4. first time i've encountered them in a fic.:D

i really liked this. had to keep my laughter in lest i get scolded by my sleeping mom :D

i myself have written some marysues of mine, but they don't stand a chance against Maria. she is just too perfect for all of us XD. her entire existence screams, "I'm holier than thou. Worship coz I'm da BOMB!" XDD

nice story/parody(?) :D

:Zeriku:

Honestly, this fic was just a waste of time. You are right in saying that most authors try to portray themselves through their Mary-Sues in an attempt to show people what they always wanted to be. It's no surprise, therefore, to see that your Mary-Sue is the most exaggerated of them all- It's natural for people with little talent to dream enormous (Sorry; I couldn't come up with a more powerful word).
You can take this as a flame if you like or just criticism, but it won't matter to me. I'm merely giving you my honest opinion.
Did you notice the last words in this story? "Please review."
Well, if you haven't noticed, most of the 41 reviews for this story have barely anything to do with this story at all. And if it makes you happy, you're hated out here. Don't look at me, I'm new here and I just happened to come across a certain expended author's work and decided to read it. However, I realized in the end that the title of the story is the only part worth reading.
Auf wiedersehen!

HAHAHAHA! Don't these retards know that your fan fiction is actually a parody of what THEIR horrible Mary Sue-infested stories were like? Aren't they aware of the fact that we flamers don't merely attack their grammar and spelling, but we also point out that their plots (i.e. OCs, OOCs, clichés) are EXECRABLE? They're pitiable, really. All they do is blare, "YOU SUCK! @#$#@#%#%#! ^*^(^*%&%&!" Tsk, tsk, tsk. They all sound like idiotic prisoners who are about to be executed on the electric chair, cussing and blathering until the acrid stench of burning flesh reaches the noses of those nearby.

ATTENTION TO ALL MEMBERS OF THE ANTI-FLAMING CORPS:

I pity you all. You so helplessly try to destroy BYLT with these repulsive reviews. My, you just LOVE to make us laugh, don't you? You claim you hate flaming, yet you do it to attack BYLT. HA! Where's the sense in that? I thought you freaks were egoists. I guess I was mistaken. Just so you know, your retorts sound like a load of gobbledygook to us due to your innumerable grammatical errors. You never cease to amuse us, really.

REVIEW ON THE STORY:

Congratulations, BYLT. You successfully managed to write a story akin to those you have flamed. It certainly turned out to be EXTREMELY FLAMMABLE, as you had intended it to be. Had you been as stupid as your flamers were, I would have certainly flamed this story. It was hilariously ridiculous; I couldn't stop myself from laughing when I saw the similarities between it and the other absurd stories I've flamed!

Ciao.

...Dark-Hearted Writer...

Wow! O.o I couldn't help it but I was feeling bad for saying those things but...now I really don't. You flame others yet say you hate flames...haven't you ever heard of the expression 'you get what you deserve' or 'its time for you to get a taste of your own medicine'? You say you're smart but you're appearing very...well lets just say you're not the sharpest tool in the box. (Figure of speech) Seeing your other reviews...well I think I'm being nice in compar. but you go around flaming for no reason and stalk people so how can you expect them to not fight back and get you to leave them alone...I don't know why they don't just block you which is what I would do if you ever flamed me...since your flames would be a waste of space and my time.

I find your insults immature and insulting even if they're not to me. Which I don't have to worry about. My stories are longer more detailed and actually have plots...I may have some spelling errors in my earlier stories but unlike you I did take the time to improve and someday I will go back and edit them. Though I still want to keep improving which I actually do. I'm quit proud. But you really don't have much to proud of since it doesn't look like you're improving at all.

I suggest reading good stories from good authors like ArcheAnime she's GOOD.

I'm not just randomly babbling I actually did try to read this but well...it needs work okay. I suggest a beta...if anyone will for you since it seems almost everyone hates you. You must like being hated, eh? Loner type who missed a few hugs from daddy? Sounds like it to me though I'm just guessing. I don't claim it to be true.

To sum it all up...you need to learn how to explain things so people can understand this nonesence and maybe then you won't get so many bad reviews...and you may want to tone down your flaming too that may help.

Ja ne!

HAHAHAHAHHAAHA.. I love the whole list thing.. Rurouni Kenshin.. Jin Kazama.. ahhahaha

It's... it's a guy...? o__o

After all this time, I always thought this person was a girl. A real **, who flamed my younger self for fun... Really, I was angry with everything SHE stood for on this website... Flames are fine, but you don't have to be unusually cruel.

And it turns out to be a guy. Call me sexist, but now I don't really care. XD Yeah, she/he flamed the hell out of my old account. I'm resubmitting the same story, but editted because of that. So something good came out of it. However, that doesn't make up for how awful I used to feel.

I still think she/he is a **. I'm glad they're gone. =D And if they're not, then they'll be zipping over to my fic soon to flame it. The editted version. Ha.

roflmao!!

OMFG, I freaking love you! You're so mean! Xp

I love it! XD XD XD DEATH TO MARIA...er...Mary Sue!! O.o

You're so cool, you're my favorite. *adds you* XD More power to you!

Um. Interesting. Very. Though i have never read this particualr manga. May i ask though, why you flamed my fanfic for the supposed use of Mary-Sues (actually, if you could get a look at later chapters, people hate her, not like her, soo...)when you yourself seem to be infatuated wiht mary-sues? and hate falmers? why flame if you hate flamers? just a few questions. very interesting fic tho. i will have to go and read your others...

ROFL! That was wonderful and beyond. And I do agree about what you said (under the ATTENTION line in your profile). Unfortunately, I don't have the kind of guts you have. :)

you like Mary Sue eh? Well, can't blame you though... we have our own opinions... Anyway about your work... well i've never read anything like it... it's up to you if you take it positively or negatively... why don't you try writing other kinds of fics... it's just an advice... don't kill me k? you're free to say what you want to say about my fic you can flame it too... but mildly please...

HAHAHAHAHA.

Oh man. You crack me up.

*thumbs up*

I dont really see the point of this.

That was possibly the funniest ** I've read in quite a while (discounting Julian Barnes, because no one can ever mess with him). I am quite tired of fics in this category with non-existent grammar and plots recycled, like, ten million times. Good on you for taking the ** out of them. I think I found the deliberate grammar mistakes funniest of all. And this? "Pollo a la Maria." Haha! I'm so going to read your other two. Nice!