Jet always has to be a bastard about certain things. But i guess that's Jet for you. I love the stories. ^_^

I must say I've never read a story quite like this, but I do really love it! ^_^ Please update again soon! I wanna se lots and lots and lots of fluffiness!

Again, nice poem =D Good vocabulary and description, makes me feel sad about poor Jet though... T_T -gives him a plushie-

Aww, that's sad. T_T Poor Jet... not aging would really suck. But yeah, nice use of language there, I love the poem at the end (very well done. ^_^)

Hm... This Jet reminds me of Sasuke from "Naruto"... Heh heh, you probably dun know him... ANYWAY, on to the next chapter!

Teefa: Heh, any creative writing class can be inspirational. I wrote a Christmas story, a humorous romance, and a few beta chapters for stories in one.

Lufia: Poor Jetty boy! And I'm repeating myself.

Rutee: Yes you are Lu.

Prier: He's got it worse than you Croix.

Croix: (blushes) maybe he needs a girlfriend.

Prier: (blushes) That helped you, didn't it?

Teefa: Get a room you two...

Teefa: Sorry this took so long; today was brutal.

Lufia: She's sick from eating too much.

Teefa: Watch it!

Rutee: This was a really nice piece; poor Jet. They really leav it up in the air if he ages or not. The console says something about bearing the burden for generations, but it could be more symbolic because he has to save the future generations with his powers today. However, we tend to go with the aging thing because of WA1. One of the characters (won't say hero, villain, or NPC just in case you haven't played it) is also an artificial being and he had a childhood as shown in flashbacks. So we stuck with the series' past.

Teefa: Jet kawaii! Kiss and make better!

Prier: That works. . .(deep blush)

Croix: (even deeper blush)

Teefa: Heh, can't control yourself since meeting him?

Prier: (hits Teefa with baton)

Rutee: I'd say this sounded like a dream Jet had before meeting the gang. And it does make a lot of sense; after all those with amnesia are always haunted by dreams.

Prier: Just ask Croix; he'll tell you how screwed up his dreams were.

Teefa: I know what you mean about being out of the fluff mode. If you look at my author profile, you'll see that everything under WA3 is either finished or ongoing; and I haven't written for them in awhile. Mainly cuz I'm really rushed with La Pucelle at this time.

Lufia: Not playing it. . .but Teefa's on a Prier/Croix obsession.

Prier: (blushes deeply thinking about her boyfriend)

All of the chapters are great, warm and fuzzy, my inner romantic is pleased.
Write more, or face my bayonet.

That was really cute ^^ Lots of fluff and mush between Virginia and Jet is good, because she's, well... her, and Jet's a heartless bastard. Whee for changing people! Fluff is what makes the world go round. -nods sagely-

Now UPDATE!

I love your story. It's NEAT with a capital N and E and A and T.

Keep on going! The blurbs are very interesting!

This fic is made up of random blurbs? Most of it is at least. BETSY, FINISH THE CHAPTER YOU WROTE! It was good! Well update again

PLEASE FINSH WHAT YOU STATED ITS BETTER THEN YOU THINK(I FEEL ALONE IN HELPiNG THIS STORY GO ON)

THIS WAS A COOL CHAPTER BUT THE END HE JUST WANTED SO ONE AWAKE THAT WAS WEIRD

THIS STORY IS GOOD AND TO MAKE IT EVEN BETTER IM A FAN OF WA3 SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK