Just... wow. Ah... such a melancholy feeling in my heart. when one portrays a story in such a way that you can't help but fall in love with the story and the characters... just... yea. You probably understand, right?

I loved it to the end. I could hardly put it down, even pulled some last minute reading before I had to go to work. This was one of the most intense and enjoyable stories I've read in a long time. Each character were very much alive and it felt like I was watching their lifes like a movie. This is one that I'm happy I came across, it held my interest until the very end and when I couldn't read I agonized in wanting to know what happened next. Really amazing story.

Your way of telling their lives and this story was as close to spellbound and if this had been a real book, I would buy it without hesitation.

Cya,
Monkan

WOAH! I read up to chapter 15 last night and the rest this morning and I'm blown away! Your writing style is awesome and your plot is amazing, so many times I've read something that isn't consistant but this was very well written. I loved it, honestly loved it, broke my heart in places (especially just now when Bakura and Ryou died so prematurely, Bakura and Ryou are my all time favourites) and I almost screamed in other places either with happiness or sadness, my mom came in to see if I was alright at one point 'cause I was like saying "No no no, can't be happening" without realising it lol I really really REALLY loved it!

omg omg omg, that is seriously one hell of a good story!
with all that drama and angst i seriously just cannot tear my eyes away from my computer screen. i am totally in-debted to you for writing such an awesome story like this.
Even though i agree that no one can live for eternity, the fact that you let Bakura and Ryou die from something as petty as a car crash (i mean the action; everyone wear your seatbelts!!), kinda disappointed me to tell you the truth. I find itwould have been more fitting if they died, say, buggy-jumping off some cliff, though that does seem more like something reserved for Marik and Malik.
Anyway, your story was just too good. I hope that I'll get to find some of your personally written stories on the shelves of bookstores sometime in the near future!

Keep writing!

AHH IT'S ALL OVER!

I AM SO SAD!

(cries)

Anywhoosle. I nearly cried when I read that Seto/Yami/Bakura/Ryou were killed. But I loved it!! Hurray!! Excellent ending to an excellent story! I love this story so mucho, it's great.

Thanks for a terrific story that everyone should read!!
-Hikari

Love it!! Thank you so much for writing!

Oh my god!! That was fantastic! A perfect end! (At least, I think it's finished)
This story was so compelling and just.. well, wonderful all the way through! I cried for at least ten minutes when I read that Ryou and Bakura had died (Only tree years! Damn you!). I mean, first Yami and Seto (but that was sort ok because they got to spend all those years together) and then hitting me with there deaths! *sobs* I'm so close to crying again! I can barely see what I'm typing! *sniffs*
I love how it ended with Annie to. What else could you do after all that inspiration.
This was an awesome story. I'm so sad that it's ended too! I loved it so much! Definately in my top ten favourites! Thank you so much for writing it and finishing it! You're brilliant! Sorry, I'll stop with the flattery now (I can't help it! You deserve it!)
Bye!

AW! I loved it! I KNEW YAMI WASN'T REALLY DEAD! I JUST KNEW IT! (dances around happily) HURRAY! I love it! Brilliant! Now they're all getting married and lived happily ever after the end!

... Or not quite, but you get the idea. (beams) I love it! You should seriously consider renaming the characters and trying to get this published, I love the story so mucho! And because it's AU, you could do so without infringing any copyright laws! Huzzah!

Yay!
-Hikari

Hello

I just wanted to say that, no, i don't think you were being lazy with this chapter. A family reunion would have been exhausting and too... happy, I guess, for this fiction. The reason I stuck onto it so long was the fact that there was a consitant level of darkness and seriousness, without ever going to the extreme of unrealism. As with the two/three chapters before this, there is a wonderful subtle air that smooths into the finale. I'll wait until the epilouge for any other things i have to say. until then, see you!

“…but the majority of reviewers seem to want a happy ending and after everything they’ve been through I suppose they deserve a little happiness…”

Well, I’m not complaining about that ^^
I have to admit that during the first part of the chapter I wasn’t really sure anymore, if Atemu is still alive or not. I really liked the description of Setos destructive behavior. The way he wanted to accept Atemu’s death, but wasn’t able to do so. I also liked that, even though Jounouchi had given up on Seto, Yuugi was still trying to help him. It suits his personality and makes me like the little guy even more. The idea with the marriage of Seto and Atemu sounds a little strange to me, but then again: It’s understandable that Seto doesn’t want to lose Atemu again and therefore, wants a permanent binding – in this case a marriage. So I’m quite fine with it (as long as nobody gets to wear a gown *shudders*).

Ah this was SO amazingly adorably sweet! LUVED it! I'm so glad it turned out happily; I luv your writing style as well. I really can't wait for the epilogue, keep it up!

You gave Seto and Atenu a happy ending for a moment it was iffy thank you ^-^!

Aside from the fact I am sniffling like mad here... Ah, this is beautiful. Gorgeous. Wonderful. Worth the wait - WHATEVER.
Thankyou for persevering with this story and writing it!!

You know... I'm shocked this story hasn't got more reviews... It's fantastic! I'm so glad Yami's alive. I was so scared when you said he was dead! But... Yay!! Everyone's alive and happy!!

Your writing didn't falter and wasn't corny so, GREAT JOB!

I can't wait for the epilogue!!

Oh!

I don't know whether to laugh or cry!!

I will say that the 'angst **' within me is in love with you and wants to have your babies. ^_^

This entire story has just been so fabulous and I thank you for keeping me guessing at every turn. Even the events of this chapter were unforseen because of the way you opened it. I thought for sure that you'd tease us with a glimpse of Seto's suffering (nicely done, by the way), but would ultimately focus on Yugi and Jou, forcing us to wait until the last chapter to know what happened to Atemu and Seto. (You red herring thrower, you!)

I thank you again for sharing your talent and eagerly await the final chapter.

*glomptackles* (That's from the 'angst **' for you expert job of Seto-torture.)

'Ko