Oh my God. That was so sad. I love this characterization of an Elphaba who is socially inept kind of. Er, I'm not sure how to describe it. When she says she's unable to love someone like Galinda. I hate tragedies, but. But. I guess I like this.

Wow, this is wonderful =]

I must compliment you! I've never seen the Elphaba/GLinda pairing done so well. I feel like you kept them totally true to their characters, while expanding on what could have been their daily lives. Wonderful job!!

you have burnt me as a reader, but i have no flame for you

This is really sad; poor Glinda...

Man that makes a person feel bad for Glinda doesn't it. But you write her pain very well and Elphaba's holding back fit. Wonderful job!

Wow, this was truly amazing. I was moved. Throughout the story I wondered where it was going. The line " And years passed and Elphaba had fallen swiftly and painfully in love with Fiyero" really struck me. It was like an echo of the love and pain that Glinda had had for Elphaba all along. I don't know if I'm making sense. Just, it was beautiful.

((Waves arms around in earnest!))

That was so good. I loved every word. You captured Glinda so well. And I thought you did Elphie well too, and she is so hard to do. Great job! Yay for you!

Oh my God, I love you.

Awesome. I think this might be my favorite Gelphie story. Wonderful!

What can I say about this that hasn't already been said about your wonderful writing? I just want to thank you very much for sharing your talen with readers like me. You have a gift to capture emotions and style. I love all of your stories and will always look forward to more from you. Keep it up.

That is so sad. The first time I've ever seen it end where Elphaba doesn't love Glinda, but Fiyero, in the end. I guess like the book dictates it should. Of course even that is a piece of fan fiction... but at any rate, different. And sad. Nice job.

-Nina

SO I was thinking: You, me, marriage? How about it?

that was a very sad ending. Not sad as in "boohoo" sad, but melencholy sad. Glinda loved Elphie so much and Elphie thought herself incapable or unworthy to love Glinda back.
*faves*

Really good... I like how you had Glinda descrobe Elphie in the beginning... :)