Not a bad job you got going so far, I must say it does trigger some very intense curioisty. Keep it up, i'm sure it will continue into a great tale.

ok, i'm interested. please kee writing!

GASP! T-That's it!? NO! Please write more! I really want to know who's that Gerudo and that Kokiri girl! Why are Gerudos after her, what did she do to them? Continue please! I really like it!