It’s a really sweet story, I found it really cute how Kaiba kept trying to deny how much he liked Yami when it was extremely obvious that they had feelings for each other. It’s a bit OOC overall but it’s nice.

How did bakura get his own body?

i guess you could say that i am a bit of a fan of your seto/yami stories. this one didnt dissapoint, keep up the good work in the future )

very good XD

an excellent story :)

Their relationship from the beginning to the end is just so adorably cute.

This story is great! you know, you're an amazing author.

I really admire you. I can't write, you see. I'm more of a story critic. xD

Another great fanfic! _ I missed fanfics without any offensive language...

Awesome story! You did a good job!

I usually don't read yaoi fic's but this one is COOL!

me heart yami/kaiba.

great fic keep it up!:)

props 4-up!

A funny chapter! I kept laughing!

"Then he eyes widened and he blushed as red as his eyes"... try changing to "Then, his eyes widened and he blushed as red as his eyes".

Good descriptions of Yami and Seto! Love it! Love it! Love it! :)

It's a good chapter. However, there is one word that you misspelled and 2 grammar errors for accuracy's sake. You forgot to put a period on one of your sentences, but that's nothing to cry about. Your storyline is evolving. It's great! I'm loving it as the story progresses. Onwards to Chapter 3! :)

You're a really good author! Kudos to you!

A good start for the story. It has this driving force that draws readers in. I'm going to read Chapter 2 now. :)

Oh... This story is so cute! And so Kaiba too! :)