| Reviews for Sweet 16 Autumn |
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summerlovin2011 11/2/11 . chapter 11Oh please update! I love your stories so much and this one is bi exception! |
iolaaa 10/22/11 . chapter 11It's been FOREVER since you updated, please please please, do another sequel to this, it definitely has potential and I cried when it was over. |
HilaryDroxursox 10/9/11 . chapter 11Hey! I know it's been a loooooong time since you updated, but i really wish you had finished this story. You have awesome writing skills and this story truly was epic. If you're on fanfiction still and you read this, i could get you some publicity...if you decide to finish this piece Of art. Hopefully I'll get to hear more from you soon! Cya! |
selenafan99 8/23/11 . chapter 11you should definately keep going with this story and there must be a lot of readers for this story. |
MathLeft 4/2/08 . chapter 11Hi! It's been a few months since I read this story, but I thought I'd still leave you a review. I really like your story and I think it's a good thing that you also put some more serious stuff in (compared to Sweet 16 Summer). Eventually, you found the right balance between fluff and serious stuff. The last chapter, where Lizzie and Miranda were locked in the laundry room, was very good; I could really see them sitting there being stubborn (at first). I do feel sorry for Matt being sent to military school. I must say, I always liked his character in spite of (or thanks to) his mischievous manners. Will we see him back? I saw that you haven't updated in the past 2 months, so I hope I can help to persuade you to continue this story. (Please?) |
xoElle23 1/15/08 . chapter 11Great chappie. Glad the girls worked it out. Even if it did take locking them in a closet for two hours. ]] |
potterprincess06 1/14/08 . chapter 11yes keep goingi want to see where this story ends up |
countrymusicgal89 1/14/08 . chapter 11YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED! This update has made me so happy i have waited so long please update again soon... it was awesome to read this again |
brandy 1/11/08 . chapter 10 I know you haven't updated this story in a few years but I really think you should. just a thought :) |
yanks752 6/3/07 . chapter 10Is more going to be written in this story? I love these stories and hope for more! I read this and Sweet 16 Summer in one sitting a few days ago and really liked them. |
DearLizzie 2/1/07 . chapter 10You should really consider writing more LM ficts. I've read both SS summer and Autumn many times, and they are probably ranked #2 1 or #2 in my favourite saga's of all time, and I've read hundreds of LM ficts. Please write some more! :) DearLizzie |
GD Earnest 7/19/05 . chapter 10I absolutly love this whole story. I have read Sweet 16 summer and autumn all in one sitting. i wish this one would keep going. Also i have 2 stories of my own that i would love for you to review. thank you very much, and again you are a very good writer. |
countrymusicgal89 7/7/05 . chapter 10well done. I really enjoyed this chapter. Continue writing and I will read and review somemore. |
SnapesFavoriteMistress 7/7/05 . chapter 1I can see evidence of some obvious talent in your story. However, there is always room for growth :). Mainly, I would try expanding on your description of situations and emotions, give us some more insite into what the characters are thinking and feeling. It would be interesting to see what even non-essential characters (ex. Jo, Sam) are thinking and feeling in reaction to the events of the story. I condone your efforts to try a different writing style (a darker story in contrast to the fluff you are used to), but if you are not enjoying it, I think you should write whatever is in your mind, heart, and soul : ). SnapesFavoriteMistress |
countrymusicgal89 7/7/05 . chapter 9oh my goodness u need to write more I need to know what happens between Lizzie adn Gordo! Please write more I am on my knees begging! |