i liked it a lot. i think that starfire would gave acted a lot loke that. most of my doubt about raven and robin is about how thwy would make eachother even sadder but u kept that in mind and played with some other ideas too. anyway great job!

I agree. Star bashing sucks, and she wouldn't go all psycho-crazy on them. She cares deeply for her friends; she would want to be happy for them.
That being said: yay RobRae! -dances-
Sorry... needed to get that out. I liked this. Nice look into a rather different side of Starfire and her outlook on life.
Oh, and that moment between her and Cyborg was really sweet.

I liked this story very much. It was refreshing to read a story with Robin and Raven getting together without Star trying to kill Raven or acting like it didn't bother her at all. I found this to be what I would consider a realistic reaction by Star, I almost felt sorry for her, almost. Thanks...Gerry

I'm always up for giving Star some more depth. Too often she's turned into a jealous harpy or over glorified. I think you handled her very well. She is tricky to pin down. It was nice to see her treated with sensitivity and compassion. Nicely done.

Nice

that was interesting and i agree starfire is a really hard character to grasp but you did a really good job. that was cute. i liked it a lot.

("I bet they aren't sitting next to each other because they'll start cuddling like love birds if they did! Get it? Haha—ow!")

holy crap thats a funny line. great fic. i hate the Star/Robin pairing. just doesn't work does it. It ends up making robin ooc.

Wow, you have no idea how wonderful it is for a Robin/Starfire fan to read a *mature* Robin/Raven fan's work. This was an excellent fic, you really got Starfire down. I was even able to look past my ship to really enjoy this fic. Well done, well done.

I love this story and I completely agree with it. I mean, I'm a hardcore Robin/Raven fan, but while I think that Starfire mnight get a little jealous and angry for awhile if Robin and Raven ever got together, I just don't think she'd flip out and go crazy. She's way too nice for that. It just isn't in her.

That was so good!

It didn't make it to the point where I'd have to hold my stomach with all the sweetness from Star, or how messed up BB and Cy were being; it fit in the middle.

I think you did Starfire some good justice in this piece. Her voice is a tricky one; I can only ever write anything with her in it when I'm hyped up on sugar or I just saw my fave movie er sumthin'. But you were able to get her down pretty good prolly better than the writers themselves.

Very awesome job! The reasons behind everything kind of went along with the series, to a degree and Star's feelings seemed just. Great one-shot! Loved it.

I adore! I adore! It wasn't really parody-- can angst and parody go together? --but great job anyway. Loved the coke/ice metaphor.

Yeah, Starfire is really hard to portray. I think what's most difficult is her thoughts. Does she think in that strange language patterns, or does she think in Tamaranian, or... eh, anyway, great job as always! (And update Matter of QS soon!)

^^

I.LOVE.IT. Awesome story! You're a very good writer

This feels like a M2M song.

Wait, I love M2M. Never mind.

Anyway, I certainly thought it was amusing, yet thought provoking.

Starfire had her chance, she blew it. That simple.

It would have nice if you kinda, sorta explained how the Birds got together but it wasn't needed.

They're together, that's all that matters.

And R/R interaction would have been fine too but it wasn't the point. Still would have been nice though. Smirk.

And you used the word snarky. My props.

Nice characterization of Star. She acted just how I'd think she'd act about the whole thing.

But with humor spliced in.

I loved the ending.

R/S best friend angle hasn't been approached since Apprentice. Sorta missed that. Wonderful touch.

And I was amused by the temptation.

But I enjoyed the...yin/yang, Coke/ice metaphor most.

More than I thought.

Might rephrase that a bit but you hit the nail on the head.

Nice angst with wonderful subtle humor. Impressive.

And now you better do a humor piece before you damage your brain any further.

Sante.

me like fic