great description of conflicts within and without

OHH! That's good. Interesting perspective on Sauron. Made me want to face the truth of my problems. I'm having a bad day (It's Tuesday).

I almost felt sorry for Sauron.

Good description. I could visuilize the story very well.

There seems to be some spelling errors. Nothing major, just wrong words (eg: "not" instead of "now").

Overall I enjoyed it. New, cool perspective.