Looks like the pen trick really worked... though not in the way that he figured it would. xD Yay~ And I really agree that there aren't enough AtobeTezuka stories. xD

Oh that was lovely. And Tezuka being so amused with Atobe? *Brilliant.*
-Lilacs

Hey this is nice haha...

Wa!! Kawaii!! Wow, that's one of the most kawaii AtoTezu fics I've ever read!! One of the best!! Spectabular! I loved it! *heart heart heart*, I'm starting to super adore this pairing ~.~

Wow! Definitely, definitely one of the best AtoZuka fics around. You did such a fine and accurate job with characterization, even given such a short length. Your Tezu and Atobe were brilliant and /funny/. Loved the fic.

Hi there fellow Singaporean. ^^ Rather rare to find a compatriot on this site. Anyways, just wanted to say I enjoyed this immensely. It was amusing to see the high-and-mighty Atobe's inane attempts at conversation *snickers* And you are right, there are too little fics of this absolutely adorable pairing. So write more! And write longer fics!! I'd be more than willing to read them. Enjoy the upcoming Deepavali and Hari Raya breaks. ciao!

YESH! Uphold the ZukaAto/AtoZuka lurve! ^_^ Thanks very much for sharing that with us. That was so cute! I have to say that you have a great style of writing. And the humour is definitely not lost... Oh man... tezubots and Atobe's Hissy fits... I'm having aball right now conjuring those up in my imagination. XD Great job! ^_^

Becky Marie recced this fic, so I came and read it out of curiousity since I'm relatively wary of all TezuAto fics nowadays.

Was pleasantly surprised at how well everything worked out, and how magnificently prissy Atobe was. XD Very, very cute. Hope to see more from you in the future~!

Uwa... an AtoTezu fic! *dies* I've missed them so much! This is very amusing indeed. Like it lots. ^^

OH MY GOD! An Tezuka/Atobe fic! ::glomps you:: you authors are of an extremely rare species. I will treasure you always if you continue this story till the very end! ^_^

Finally! A TezukaAtobe fic! You've made me so happy! Can't wait to see how their relationship progresses.

muahhaha i like! please write more unless this is a one shot so never mind but any ways go tezuka!

I like this story. I has potential.

I am wondering what is Atobe's reaction to tezuka's offer.

By the way, why does Atobe suddenly need to have conversation with Tezuka?

So how will start the chase and who will end it?