I just wanted to let you know how wonderful I think this is. I've been trying to rewrite that first part of ch. 10 for myself... and you, I suppose, because we're the only ones that really matter. What am I doing here, reading this for the third time?

Basking in all its wonderfulness. Lizlove, you wrote this marveously and without flaw (not grammar wise, I think you/I/whoever forgot a couple commas). The end is perfect and the end is wat counts the most.

You build up from one idea, attention span, and pull it into flying... getting away from it all. I don't think you go into the attention span thing more than twice, so perhaps a name change is necessary, but it's your fic.

You're inspiring sometimes, Liz. I hope you had a great Christmas.

P.S. I pulled an all nighter last night! I wonder if you could tell from my review? :}

I have but one word...OUTSTANDING! Among the best fictions this site has had to offer, your's is among them! I could almost feel the desperation and sense the frustration dripping off every word. You have a gift. Keep up the great work! Oh, and don't be afraid to check out my new stuff.

SIL! *hugs you* Author alerts/favorite stories alert won't work on me... meh... lol, I love this fic. ^^ It portrays Minako in my favorite light... dark, sarcastic, and bitter.

The reform school was really realistic-- and I love how you cut it off so suddenly.

Oh, wow, that was incredibly painful. In a good way, though, because the pain came from the anguish I could feel resonating from the story... very realistic, very involving, a feeling of all-around injustice residing throughout the story. Minako was... different, not nessecarily OOC but a different outlook than one might expect.

I love it! Very nicely done. I love Minako's attitude - it's so different from the way I usually see her portrayed. The setting is wonderfully unique, and the ending is shocking and poignant. Great piece of work!

- Lea

Your ending was sort of like. A 'BAM' kind of thing. I personally didn't expect Heero to cry. T_T; That's what I didn't like. So I'll just pretend that Minako feels her own tears on her face and yes. x:

Also about the ending...
T_T;; I loved it. Like how it cuts off and everything. It gives me the feeling that this isn't like anything else in this section. It's original and different and that's something I really admire you for bringing out. Pleasetellmethatmadesense. >>;

I like Lucy. She's like.. The person that's role-model-ish and smart and stuff. And yes. Wtf I don't know. I just liked her. She was savage. In a good way. 0:

Yes so.
asjkldf Shat I wanted to give you good comments and everything but I can't. T_T Anywho. Yes. I loved it tons.

*heart*

oh wow. oh wow. oh wow. oh crap. oh wow.

to be honest, as you can clearly see above, i have like no clue how to respond to this story... except to say I LOVE IT! Best ending ever... especially since we know what Heero is like and how he could have responded to that situation. It kind of makes what happens at the end so pointless because the reader knows a better result that could have occured.

This is like the first time i have ever noticed, and even thought about, the proper use of a crossover and you have achieved it. I love this story Sil and i cant wait for your next one... you just keep becoming a better and better writer!

*squeezes eyes shut*

it was a beautiful ending, sil, it really was. but that doesnt mean i cant hate you for it.

but meat st helens was hilarious.

and i cant very well write a review when youre eating my head.

and i was looking forward to your perspective on (longer) life in a reform school! not quite as...laugh-out-loud entertaining as some author's renditions, im sure, but you manage to stuff humor inbetween your philosophy all the same. not quite the same *kind* of humor, but still...

you need to finish Flying Black, dearie. methinks you're a little stuck on the whole "kill them before they even begin to count as a couple" concept. ^_^

YOU ARE SO NOT ALLOWED TO TAUNT ME LIKE THAT.

woman, you can turn the power rangers movie into **, and yet you wont sit yourself down and stuff all your one liners on a page? LAZY **!

"A dark lonely night breeds many things, pushing its coincidences upon reality and forcing those caught in its web to live within its narrow confines."

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

i love this storie! itz soo deep n insightful...wow...hehe ur inspired me =D

Huh. You know, that was almost touching. In a weird, depressing jailbait sort of way. To be honest, if you changed the names you could have a kick-** short story to submit to an anthology or something. In short, I enjoyed this very much (and the song at the end was fitting too).
-N