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| Lady Venom 2001-05-26 ch 19,  | abuseit was ok, I liked it, nm to say just that a 'stupid' person like me does not have the ability to write like this, by the way, it was fun bye L-chan thanks for everything |
| Classified... 2001-02-18 ch 19, anon. | abuseThis story is really good....it would've been better if I didn't owe King Kai 50000000000000000000 in cash, if I wasn't dead right now, and my lifetime supply of coffee isn't missing... it's all Peppy's fault... (King Kai) You still owe me... (Me) *Sweatdrop* I told you I left all my cash in my ship... *Meanwhile on a distant planet,a small girl with a tail,black hair, and black eyes is sitting at a bar* (Little Girl) Hey, Knife... bring me another sample of Thieves' Wine... *The orange man in ripped clothing, named Knife, shakes his head* (Knife) Peppy, you know you shouldn't drink...your father would have my hide! You should spend that money you stole on the Latest thieving equipment... (Peppy) *Swishs tail around and sighs* Alright... I was only joking... speaking of father...where is he... (Knife) *Chuckles* Kern [Peppy's father], is off stealing from dark warlords again... one day the sly King of Theives is going to get himself killed... (Peppy) *Counts the money she stole from my ship* Nah... (Knife) Your father isn't very smart ya know... (Peppy) Yeah... but he's a genius when it comes to thievery... I learned from the best... (Knife) Yeah... *Knife looks thoughtful* What did you do with all that coffee in that ship? (Peppy) *Smirks* I blew it up... *Back at King Kai's, King Kai tells me the news* (Me) NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! *Is heard through out the universe* (King Kai)... *Back at the distant planet* (Peppy) You hear that? (Knife) *Thinking, uh-oh, the guys must've blew up the treasury again* |
| Thanos6 2001-02-18 ch 19, | abuseI like. Should be interesting to see what happens next. |
| Princess Vegeta 2001-02-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseHeh.. poor Veggie... |
| Cathie 2000-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat series! I loved how vegeta was a kid, but he called Goku "Goku" waaaaaaay too many times. If U would redo it, make him call him kakarot more! |
| cassidy taylor 2000-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a great story! I will just have to read more. |
| cassidy taylor 2000-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know how but I knew that this would happen. This story is just too good. |
| ich 2000-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseooooOOOoooo......a sequal i am intrested |
| ich 2000-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it alot good job... |
| Dunno 2000-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa, who's the new guy? Hehehe...must...have...mooooorrrreeee! (ok, it's time for me to stop chugging down sugar now) |
| TheUltimatePan 2000-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseHURRY UP W/ THE SEQUAL!!!! ::starts chanting:: SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL!! |
| Angelina 2000-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abusei like the series so far! can't wait for the sequel :) |
| Adrienne D 2000-08-01 ch 1, | abusehiya! i'm glad there'll be a sequel!! this sounds interesting... yes, very interesting indeedeedo! ^.^() hehe, what will happen now...?? well, i gots to go! byeth byeth! |
| Dunno 2000-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! Bravo! Woohoo! Um. Yeah. Me likes. Write more stories. They GOOOOOOD! (I apologize for my insanity). |
| Dunno 2000-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseYahoo...go Veggie! Oh, and I'm glad you found your pony, good luck! |