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a certain slant of light
2006-12-03
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, although, in my opinion, the ending leaves something to be desired.

Keep writing!

Genetix
Switchback
2006-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThat's so sweet. I think you should continue with this and make it a full blown story. I know you said a one shot but because you said that it makes me want to curl up into a ball and cry.

Please I beg you... It's the best starting chapter for Tifa and Vincent fluffiness. I understand if you will not continue but atleast I couldn't say I didn't try.

Anyway, brilliant chapter. Vincent and Tifa are so in character. Kudos to you.
Tifa Aya Lockheart21
2006-05-06
ch 1,
abusekeep going. I loved it.
catastrophe_fury (Brian)
2006-01-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like this story, even if it is short. It made me reflect on some things that I've otherwise overlooked. Very good job in my opinion.
onyx
2005-09-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww, that was so sweet. i loved it
Cathartic Trance
2005-07-29
ch 1,
abuseWhat goes throgh your head when you write these things? eh eh eh? You're an amazing writer! Although Vincent was pretty talkative here, it fit the occassion. I really enjoyed this little one-shot. You just made me appreciate the night sky even more than I already do. (The nightsky I find is more pleasent to look at then the day sky to me. Partially bnecause I also like black a lot, but the stars are also so beautiful. And the moon seems pretty powerful considering the fact that people say it controls the tides :P)
Kopa
2005-07-05
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is awesome! The night sky is so beautiful compared to day. I just love to stare at it. I love your stories! They're great, hope to read more!

Angel x
Nbluju
2004-10-30
ch 1,
abuseThe way you wrote this was so wonderful. Great story.

(^0^)
Tifas-love
2004-10-28
ch 1,
abusePretty. =3

This was very nice. Too bad it was a one-shot.

Hey, did Tifa and Vincent...y'know...do 'it'?

...XD

-Tifas-love90
Saesama
2004-10-28
ch 1,
abuseAnd I wonder why people don't like VinTif's, when these's ones like this one out there. Very nice.
Emri
2004-10-27
ch 1, anon.
abusethis was a pretty little short ^-^ yes the sun does blind all...and not many appreciate the night...is such a shame...
Nighttime is such a wonderful thing^-^

really liked how you wrote this

noticed that Vincent kept calling her Miss Lockhart and not just her name heh...such a gentleman...
is there going to be a bigger story to go with this?
don't know if your story "Switchin'" is updated yet...-thinks- oh! that reminds me...still need to figure out that annoying scanner...grr...^-^ hope you like it when finally get it to you..-sweatdrops-eheheh...yeah...soon hopefully^-^'

well anyway, looking forward to more of your lovely works!
Fantasy-dreamz
2004-10-27
ch 1,
abuseI loved it.
Alot of my favorite things are in this One-shot. it will go under my favorites =) Would you ever add more to this? it would be a very good fic.
DragonGirl323
2004-10-27
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very wonderful little one shot! Even though it's so short it was very well thought out. I liked it a bunch!^_^

Hope you write more!

Until then! Huggles!

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323
Lance Cortex
2004-10-27
ch 1,
abuseVery poetic. I thought it was a well-thought-out and clever analogy, personally. Keep up the good work.
Verdot
2004-10-27
ch 1,
abuseLovely idea, great metaphor. He's a little talkative, but hey, it's more fun that way. ^_^

Good work.

~Cendrillo
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