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| a certain slant of light 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, although, in my opinion, the ending leaves something to be desired. Keep writing! Genetix |
| Switchback 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sweet. I think you should continue with this and make it a full blown story. I know you said a one shot but because you said that it makes me want to curl up into a ball and cry. Please I beg you... It's the best starting chapter for Tifa and Vincent fluffiness. I understand if you will not continue but atleast I couldn't say I didn't try. Anyway, brilliant chapter. Vincent and Tifa are so in character. Kudos to you. |
| Tifa Aya Lockheart21 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abusekeep going. I loved it. |
| catastrophe_fury (Brian) 2006-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this story, even if it is short. It made me reflect on some things that I've otherwise overlooked. Very good job in my opinion. |
| onyx 2005-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww, that was so sweet. i loved it |
| Cathartic Trance 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseWhat goes throgh your head when you write these things? eh eh eh? You're an amazing writer! Although Vincent was pretty talkative here, it fit the occassion. I really enjoyed this little one-shot. You just made me appreciate the night sky even more than I already do. (The nightsky I find is more pleasent to look at then the day sky to me. Partially bnecause I also like black a lot, but the stars are also so beautiful. And the moon seems pretty powerful considering the fact that people say it controls the tides :P) |
| Kopa 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is awesome! The night sky is so beautiful compared to day. I just love to stare at it. I love your stories! They're great, hope to read more! Angel x |
| Nbluju 2004-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThe way you wrote this was so wonderful. Great story. (^0^) |
| Tifas-love 2004-10-28 ch 1, | abusePretty. =3 This was very nice. Too bad it was a one-shot. Hey, did Tifa and Vincent...y'know...do 'it'? ...XD -Tifas-love90 |
| Saesama 2004-10-28 ch 1, | abuseAnd I wonder why people don't like VinTif's, when these's ones like this one out there. Very nice. |
| Emri 2004-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was a pretty little short ^-^ yes the sun does blind all...and not many appreciate the night...is such a shame... Nighttime is such a wonderful thing^-^ really liked how you wrote this noticed that Vincent kept calling her Miss Lockhart and not just her name heh...such a gentleman... is there going to be a bigger story to go with this? don't know if your story "Switchin'" is updated yet...-thinks- oh! that reminds me...still need to figure out that annoying scanner...grr...^-^ hope you like it when finally get it to you..-sweatdrops-eheheh...yeah...soon hopefully^-^' well anyway, looking forward to more of your lovely works! |
| Fantasy-dreamz 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Alot of my favorite things are in this One-shot. it will go under my favorites =) Would you ever add more to this? it would be a very good fic. |
| DragonGirl323 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very wonderful little one shot! Even though it's so short it was very well thought out. I liked it a bunch!^_^ Hope you write more! Until then! Huggles! Sincerely, DragonGirl323 |
| Lance Cortex 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseVery poetic. I thought it was a well-thought-out and clever analogy, personally. Keep up the good work. |
| Verdot 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseLovely idea, great metaphor. He's a little talkative, but hey, it's more fun that way. ^_^ Good work. ~Cendrillo |