This my friend is the sadest most heart breaking thing I have ever read. For that I salute you!

I really liked this different twist on telling Ran what happened. Very well done.
~Kari Minamoto

Oh my. That was nearly tear-jerking... I'll refrain from tossing the word 'poor' around willy-nilly... But sheesh! Shinichi's so messed up.. And, you're right, Ran probably WOULD try to suicide if she ever found out. Sad, very sad.

And somehow I have a smile on my face. Good job, good job. ;)

CUUTE! ^^ very very cute! ^^

is this going to end tradegy? I hope not! Please get Shinichi and Ran back together!

Ohh...Very cool! Kawaii ending! I really liked this, it made me think someone was going to get hurt in the end, and it made me panic at first (lol, I'm a dork)...I really really liked this! ^-^

Damn, I was hoping it would be the other way around. I think it would have been funny if she got to the roof, only to see him about to jump off. Heh heh heh... Yes, I do have a sick sense of humor. Anyway, good story overall. Very nice.

I CRIED. I. CRIED. T_T

The end made me cry. Pretty good job ^^...I enjoyed it. I think Shinichi was a bit TOO romantic, and...well, both of them were out of character, but all we can do is imagine right now how he will break it to her, that sweet, sweet angel...His suffering...right...

Anyway, good job. An enjoyable, decently endowed read.

Nice fic. Exept for some words you split in two and some you put together. This only occurs in the first two chapters and you've improved your writing much in the third chapter.

Even if Ran at first seems OOC I think she's as much in character as she could be. This fic is DARK and it is rare for DC fics. Keep up the good work ^^

well. I've sniffled, sighed, cried, erm... and every other emotion in the last three chappys... first chappy i'm crying and mad at Ran.. second i'm going teary eyed and awwing.. and now i'm all of the above... All in all I really liked the story.. okeis.. I loved (as i just quoted to one of my friends online.. for a moment there I thought I'd hate you XD in a good way that we all hate great authors... (its a compliment just believe me XD) but you revived yourself.. because the whole thing just made it a bloody brilliant masterpiece) So yes... all in all.. even if there were a couple OOC moments (frankly? I don't care.. I feel like if its well written.. well its gonna be that persons writings so its usually gonna sound a bit different) But yes... Iloved it.. so *applauds to death and sets up on top list of fanfics *winks**

Ran: How dare yo call me a **! You little, YOU ARE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT!
*gots held back by Shinichi*
Shinichi: well thanks for saying we made up... eventhough we would have anyways...

I just read it, that was hm...intense.
yeah, thats all I can say to describe the way I felt...intense. lol

The ending was a bit predictable but hey, its the drama that counts, :)

That was good. Very toching indeed. I didn't understand any of the Japanese but that's okay. It was a beautiful story.

really like this story kip going! ^^

That was scary.. and sweet.. and sad... it almost made me cry...

Maybe.. somemore cvhapters after this? It's quite a ending where it stops arruptly... Please?