E... Very possiblly true. Mother bears and their cubs, and other such cliches. Nicely done.

Iiiiiinteresting! Weird concept: a BatWoman. I might want to try my hand at it, but I doubt I could do it as well. Congrats! )

Wow.

Whoa, that was cool. Sequel! SEQUEL!

oooh, i like. It would be really cool to see follow-up stories of this. It was written well, and I really had a feeling for the character. so in the end...i want MORE! a 20/10, sooooooo goooooood

I wouldn't have realized that Batman had been gender-swapped until the end of the story if you hadn't placed the acknowledgement at the start of the story. It's very well written and just exudes Bat-attitude!:) [Not entirely sure about the gun, though, because of the inordinant canon law that states Batman doth not liketh guns. But it's your vision, and fits in an alt-BatUniverse.] Good job.