That was excellent! I admit I had to skip several paragraphs in an attempt not to spoil myself (I've only seen the first two seasons), but even so it was ever so good! I am always surprised when I watch the Dead zone just how very unsupernatural it is considering the fact that it's about a psychic, in fact it's one of the things I like best about it. But here you slotted the supernatural into the world with ease, came up with a great plot, and caught the tone of the show and characters perfectly.

HOLY ** HELL! I LOVE IT! ...really wouldn't mind a sequel... (hint, hint) Pwease?!

The story is so cool! XD
I love the scene where Johnny asks
Bruce what he's doing in his bedroom!
Bruces answer is so great!

greate story, but jewish isn't a language, hebrew is.
"He repeated the words in Jewish" schould be he repeated the words in hebrew. keep up the good work
:)

I absolutely love this freaky tale! Applause to you (and a plushie Johhny Smith doll ;) Really looking forward to anything else you have in the works. One of the things that impressed me the most was the brilliantly realistic capturing of the Johnny/ Bruce banter, and the relationships between the characters was so incrediably like the show. Well done. Not many writers can weave something like this together- but you did it so well! (Holds hands up, big puppy dog eyes wide) More please.

That was an incedible story! So spooky! But I loved it all. Kudos. You have made another fan. ^_^ I hope to see more from you.

That was wonderful story.
Thx.

Enjoyed it? I loved it! I definetly think you should make a prequel! That would be great.. If there's any chance you are, can you send me an email at october_dreamescape@? Thanks!

Oh, wow! What a freaky story! Totally awesome! Couldn't put it down (so to speak)! Perfect for Halloween!