nice.

I have a request, however,

Shoaran (Shaolin? however you're writing his name) is Chinese (Cantonese). It's really, really, really jarring to suddenly see the Japanese onii-chan instead of go go (big brother in Cantonese) (not sure how the pin yin is, it's gou gou or go go, say the o like a the short o of top (with a british accent, singsong))

You couldn't...change it to go go, could you?

NYA! who is 'him'!

;_; so sad..

Ah! I still don't like dangyun... he should just give up on her... It's his own damn fault!

I have a feeling i'm not going to like siwan either.. she seems arrogant and naive to me. I really want to slap her.. -hand in position-

oh... okay it not some random pedo... :D

Dx NO NO NO! NO! THIS IS A SxS FIC! (and i mean syaoran) NOT A SAKURA x SOME RANDOM PEDOPHILE! Dx NOOOOOOO! \(0O0)/

0_o at that last part my sick side yelled out: PEDO PEDO PEDO PEDO oh wait she's 19 right...?

;

X"D drama!

I really got scared at first because i thought it was that dude XD lol- that might be pretty awesome though... more dramatic XD /shot

:D love rival!

:D ah! yes yes yes!

Ah! lovely chapter- i was very confused as to what was happening until the end.

This is one of the worst fanfics I have ever read and believe me when I say that I have read many (around 890). It goes against everything I have believed in.

WOHO!

Go SYAORAN!

that was a sweet ending man.

I like this story! Really well done, but I don't like how she like Syaoran, Shaolin and Dangyun at the same time.