 3dumplings3 4/18/12 . chapter 1nice.
I have a request, however,
Shoaran (Shaolin? however you're writing his name) is Chinese (Cantonese). It's really, really, really jarring to suddenly see the Japanese onii-chan instead of go go (big brother in Cantonese) (not sure how the pin yin is, it's gou gou or go go, say the o like a the short o of top (with a british accent, singsong))
You couldn't...change it to go go, could you? |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 22NYA! who is 'him'! |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 10;_; so sad.. |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 9Ah! I still don't like dangyun... he should just give up on her... It's his own damn fault!
I have a feeling i'm not going to like siwan either.. she seems arrogant and naive to me. I really want to slap her.. -hand in position- |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 8oh... okay it not some random pedo... :D |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 7Dx NO NO NO! NO! THIS IS A SxS FIC! (and i mean syaoran) NOT A SAKURA x SOME RANDOM PEDOPHILE! Dx NOOOOOOO! \(0O0)/ |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 60_o at that last part my sick side yelled out: PEDO PEDO PEDO PEDO oh wait she's 19 right...?
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 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 5X"D drama! |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 4I really got scared at first because i thought it was that dude XD lol- that might be pretty awesome though... more dramatic XD /shot |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 3:D love rival! |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 2:D ah! yes yes yes! |
 Ree-Vance 1/1/11 . chapter 1Ah! lovely chapter- i was very confused as to what was happening until the end. |
 fanfic critic 11/7/10 . chapter 23 This is one of the worst fanfics I have ever read and believe me when I say that I have read many (around 890). It goes against everything I have believed in. |
 hazel eyes 02 4/24/09 . chapter 23WOHO!
Go SYAORAN!
that was a sweet ending man. |
 Moons-Chan 3/12/09 . chapter 23I like this story! Really well done, but I don't like how she like Syaoran, Shaolin and Dangyun at the same time. |