| Reviews for Intolerance |
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Susan Hillwig 2/27/05 . chapter 1 If I read any more of your stuff, I may die laughing! I'm a big Bat-fan, and I think you nailed everyone perfectly. My only complaint is please put a space or something in between scene changes - everything ran together when I was reading. PS - I LOVE JIMMY! |
Corbin Slate 12/23/04 . chapter 1LOL! This was so cute! I loved it! :) Jimmy was fun, and Bruce's reactions were great! Keep up the great work. |
Gary 11/19/04 . chapter 1 People at work were looking at me, wondering why I kept laughing out loud. The "stick up your pooper" was perhaps the funniest 100-words-or-less I've ever read. Sorry I have no constructive criticism, other than you should include a "you'll shoot coffee out your nose" warning. |
Zach 11/2/04 . chapter 1 The best fanfic I have ever read. Period. Actually, calling it fanfic is kind of a degrading insult; fanfic, to me, means Badly Written and Squirmingly Awful Characterizations. Not here! Kudos kudos kudos. But WHY does Tim need a BATH? |
giveGodtheglory 10/28/04 . chapter 1 Jimmy is ebil. :D |
RobinofYJ 10/28/04 . chapter 1LOL! “I don’t know what that is, but it sounds ebil. |