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'In this case, when I put an item in one of these pockets on the belt, the item shrinks small enough to fit inside, and vice versa when I take it back out again. I don’t quite know how it works though, a friend made it for me a long time ago." '

I demand to know who gave you this technology. If it is not relinquished into my hands in the next 24 hours, I'll make sure you're the Hero of Cell Block 58, you damned thief!

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Aside from your blatant theft of my greatest invention, a very nice chapter. I'm sorry I didn't get round to reading it before now, but I'm a lazy bugger... I mean like... Woah... Lazy ¬¬

By the by, one of your paragraphs is in all Italic, caused it was lumped together to one of those rare thought processes from our omnipotent Elf...

And, of course... Make sure everything's spelt right, and there's no silly mistakes, but you're not silly, are you... are you?

Keep up the good work.

heres your reveiw but im a little confused as to what happened to zelda...

Well, well... Yet another chapter goes up, and another enjoyable read...

Keep up the good read, but please, don't screw up your GCSEs for the sake of a fanfiction... well, unless YOU want to that is...

Makes me wanna do my own fanfic... lol, maybe I will sometime!

In response to your review, yeah, I still remember you. In fact, I think that you made a suggestion to the story when Eggman and Metal Sonic were about to be evicted, something involving Metal Sonic kicking military ** as I recall. It's nice to know that the old crowd is still around. From now on, we're the Old School. I'll have to find some others.

About the story. It was a little short, didn't give me a good idea of what was to come, but I like how it's shaping up.

This was a good chapter! Update soon! Yeah, E3 version is going to be pretty kool, it's on gamecube too. happy, too, cuz that's why I mainly got it. Anywho.

I'm amazed at how much stuff you put in one chapter. It's not the mose detailed story but has just the right amount. It doesn't go too fast at all. Oh and you update faster than some other authors. Anywho LOVED the chapter, as usual. Update SOON though!

*raises hand*I've got a DS! It's pretty cool. There just isn't many games but it's still cool! I liked this chapter. It was not confusing at all. Very interesting. Was Link in a trance(how the heck do you spell that?) Anywho, PLEASE UPDATE!

oh man thse two were freakin awesome,I love the action,YAY ACTION,man you took so long to write another chapter,I was a bit bored at the end of the last chapter,it wsas temping to skip it

but man those action scenes rock dude

OH PLEASE! Don't say you're a Malinker and that this is going to be a Malon/Link story! It would so destroy everything with this good story! Because it's great, but if its a malink I'm out of here! And I want to know stuff like this before I read something I don't want to read!

This was a good chapter! A lot of action! Anywho, you're getting a DS? Cool! I wish I could get one, but I think GBA will be the last little system I can get because of my orrible vision! Anyway, update soon!

Really good! I like the plot.

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Yeah! Great chapter! Yeah, I heard the game would come out fro March through June, but maybe that's the Japanese version. Ah, well. I also heard it would be called Revolution or something but Rains of Sorrow sounds better. ANywho, can't wait for the next chapter! Yeah!

damn what took you dude now i have ta read the the whole story again...anyways no action just talking It was good but I hope for some serious action

This was a good chapter! Keep it up!